Reviews for Skiajati |
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Divine above question chapter 1 . 7/30/2018 I like it. |
Wolf Guard Miestwin chapter 1 . 7/29/2018 Ok, you got my interest. I'm assuming Mirio will get One For All and Izuku will have Umbras abilities. I wonder how will he utilize Excal's hyper-lethal powerset to non-lethally take down villains. Well, can't wait for the next chapter. |
MysticBandit chapter 1 . 7/29/2018 Things look good so far, been waiting for a MHA/WF cross. A few things stood out to me though. 1) Some words were repeated in the same sentence when used to describe something, 'surprise' being the one I remember. 2) The 'Hey Kiddo' line doesn't quite work, since Kiddo is the players nickname, The Man in the Wall using it to taunt you works because it proves that something was watching you, and the rest of the Zariman kids. However, changing Kiddo to Deku works way better because it's an important nickname to Midoriya, one only one person uses at that point, so how does this voice know it, and why? Aside from that, the use of more details on actions and setting goes a long way too. Looking forward to future chapters, let's see how this turns out.:) |
HeartOfNowhere chapter 1 . 7/28/2018 Looking foward to the next chapter. I have a feeling that Izuku going trough Umbra's memories will end up being a greater emotional ride than the one in the game. |
showbizrex chapter 1 . 7/28/2018 You have my attention. i would like to know if other warframe will be in this story, Just curious. I wait impatiently for the next chapter. Keep the good work |
Darkdawnomega chapter 1 . 7/27/2018 I have no idea why I'm so interested in this story; I play warframe and watch bnha, but the idea of a quirkless Izuku ending up with Umbra in some way, shape or form, just seems like such a good idea! And I love stories that feature Mirio moreso than the actual series. So this just... really works? I can't wait to see where you take it! |
K1NG and J0K3R chapter 1 . 7/27/2018 So... Ok this is interesting. From what I've gathered; 1. Izuku has a Tenno's abilities, mainly Umbra's. 2. Mirio is the one that gets Allmight's attention. 3. Umbra is in Japan. 4. Chances are, Izuku's gonna fuse with Umbra. |