Reviews for Instinctive Behaviour |
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![]() ![]() ![]() what a cool start |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like there would have to be a reason why Harry’s magic connected to Hermione’s. Destiny or Soulmates have been done to death. What if Hermione was another instinctive Animagus? Maybe the polyjuice potion didn’t have the wrong hair, but it forced a partial transformation because she drank it at the point of greatest potency, right after it was brewed. And maybe, if Harry and Ron hadn’t found her, the troll attack would have triggered her first change, while she was still young enough for accidental magic. Food for thought. This is terribly interesting as a premise, great job! Blessed be, Brother Bludgeon |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute. i like this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, interesting start. And yes, why would Dumbledore be so certain that the letter would stay, as well as Harry remain in the basket? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww that's so cute, I almost drool at the cuteness that are Hermione and Harry, I can't wait to see the reaction from Jennifer and William when they found out that the Lemur is actually a little boy, and please don't make this a Harry/Hermione sibling, hoping for a Harmione pairing in the future, and who knows Harry might inspire Hermione to become an Animagus as well, maybe a female Lemur. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this is just amazingly CUTE! A great, if unusual choice for Harry's animagus form. I can't wait to see what the Grangers do when they find out he's a little boy. More SOON Please! Favored |
![]() ![]() ![]() delightful - thank you for a much better beginning. Harmony right from the start and a great 'in-your-face' to the MOB when ever he finally decides to 'check' on Harry. warmest regards |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome first chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() TALK ABOUT A SHOCK WHEN THEY FIND OUT THE TRUTH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start - excited to see how it will unfold - I think Harry is 1 year 4 months and Hermione is a bit over 2 years old? I hope you have it is a Harmony ship, and not just have them be brother and sister. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seems like a cute start to a good story. Good characterization and smooth flow. I look forward to updates. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() more plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story! :o |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() when would the granger find out that the lemur is a human |