Reviews for Thrashing Waves
Guest chapter 8 . 9/6
In your next updates please separate the lines of different characters and don’t leave them in the same paragraph. It will be much easier to read this story when you don’t have to keep thinking who’s talking when the lines are all muddled together into the same paragraph, thank you! :)
cat.m.ford chapter 8 . 9/6
Overall, I'm enjoying your story. I'm loving the original content and OFC. Few issues, firstly: why do you have this listed as completed when it's clearly not? (I was worried you discontinued this until I saw you updated recently). Secondly: Your paragraphs need to be fixed, search 'paragraph tiptop' into google for help. If you can't, let me know, and I'll just pm you the info. And of course, you have grammar issues here and there, but we all get those. (I probably have mistakes in this review!) Anyway, I can't wait to see where you take this story! There isn't enough willxOC stories out there; at least no good/complete ones. If you need any tips/help just pm me.
Padfootette chapter 2 . 8/1
Loved it great chapter
Padfootette chapter 1 . 8/1
Loved it
Arwen347 chapter 1 . 7/31
Very good start! can't wait for more. please update soon?