Reviews for Naruto the Reluctant Hero |
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![]() ![]() ![]() honestly, one of the most disappointing, rushed, almost nonsensical ending I've read in a long time. This was an ending worthy of the least season of GOT. Honestly, turned a really good read into something that I'm also angry to have wasted my time reading if this was how you decided to end the story. What a bitter taste in my mouth. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well shit. You could’ve at least wrapped up the fight and we get an aftermath. This was the equivalent of having a girl edge u for 8 hours straight and then proceed to blue all you got a week |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude is seriously just pumping out every cringy generic trope he can think of at this point |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic would've been a million times better without Menma and Naruko |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even more cringe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cringe fr |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah man! Was hoping he tried to take it and get himself a mini rimuru |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait does this naruto have healing factor like other. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just had a thought just in three tails naruto is able to match ryuko in terms of brute strength. Meaning six tails are still remaining. He is able to match one of the strongest brute force user of Japan with only three tails which is not even an eighth of his power. As we know that the strength increase with tails is not linear and increas with the number of tails fuck at nine tails he would easily be able to fuck afo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a chill personality... I like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() hagakure should be expelled and placed in general class plot armour saved midoriya lazy plot |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just realised it... Is Shark Jeffrey the land shark!? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alrighty, finished the story. Thoughts Overall, it was a good story. I saw major improvements towards the end regarding writing skill and capability, however I feel that there was more spelling mistakes as it might have been rushed. I began to feel a connection to some of the characters and wanted them to grow. I enjoyed what you did with their powers and newfound abilities. It was unique and I want more. I feel like some of the loss in the story could have been greater if we spent some time on it. I think that applies to a lot of things for this. I did thoroughly enjoy the explanation for how Naruto got his power up. at first, it felt cheap, but you explained it in a great way that didn't feel totally fabricated. Overall, I enjoyed the fic and I might go ahead and look for some more NarutoxMHA after this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved Momo's speech. Naruto def needed to hear that from someone. I really hope NarutoxMina is revived! |