Nice to see you can just show up in earth territory and not get blown to hell asap...lol.

I have re-read this story many times and I still love it, hopefully you expand upon it one day

Pretty good storyline

You have a great story idea, but your grammar, spelling, and punctuation need to be improved. It was very hard to read most of the time.

need more!

Nice

Very interesting. Story about mature and childrens: )

Wonderful story.
I do hope you continue to write more stories with even more chapters.

You have an interesting idea but you're right, this is just a rushed first draft. It has promise, but you really need to refine and polish the writing.

I liked it. What year is it on earth btw?

Lol... If this was a little rushed, I would love to see what you do when you take your bloody time.

Great story. You should go over the story and fix the spelling mistakes, as it breaks the immersion.

i love this story! please write a prequel and sequel. about how the tau'ri evolve and what happen after the reaper war. this is really interesting plot..please please..

citadel citizens would be pissed when they realise that most deaths in the genocidal war could have been prevented if the council had been at least civil. The tauri still won't join but at least they on the quick dial and could contacted immediately.

It was a 'cute' story. Hehe. I think I know where this story idea came from.