|Reviews for Gnawing At The Roots Of The World|
| TheMightyMorgoth chapter 4 . 8/18
So, I'm enjoying the story and I really like the idea, especially with the Skaven in the spotlight. But one thing I need to tell you is that this is a bit hard to read.
I'd recommend going over all your stuff and reading it out loud, and with dialogue, try keeping a block of words (one paragraph for example) linked to a single character at a time. By this, I mean try to make sure that there's only one character speaking in a block of text at one time, otherwise readers might get confused, thus ruining the flow of your work. If you want to take it a step further, separate descriptive narration from dialogue.
I do hope this helps, best of luck to you and your story!
| Kylevalheru chapter 1 . 8/1
Please proof read your work, there are a few mistakes that once corrected would make this an even more enjoyable read than it already is.
P.S. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.