Reviews for Our Protector |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, he just met the one true god and he unknowingly blew it off |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you gonna make Percy stronger in this like you did in your other story Argonaut |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh boy the aftermath when percy reveals his secret will prob lead to civil war won't it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Darius? Greek scum? Damn, they must be really salty that Alexander the badass beat up Darius 3.0. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So now we finally know what happened at Budapest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() honestly i don't think wanda should have been able to get in his mind quite frankly i dont care what bitch widow and crap barton have to say on the matter, what they and shield did was wrong, and the other demigods are all traitors |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well thats some bullshit, Daredevils way is obviously not working so why would Percy agree to do it his way? Also he can piss pf about this being his city, its not. Its not even his town, he's not the only hero there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, how much did you buff Bucky? Because he and Rogers usually fought on roughly equal ground, therefore with the addition of Percy he should have stood no chance, instead Percy got his ass handed to him as if he was an amateur fighter. The whole issue Jean has with Scott could literally be over with in a second, and yet you literally made her SEE and IGNORE him thinking of a different woman? Dont particularly like this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah Persian demigods I guess? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didnt very much like the scene where Percy pretty much took all the blame for the broken relationships, when it definately wasnt all his fault. Fucking hell with Annabeth the relationship ended because she couldn't stop sucking up to the gods for 5 minutes to think about how her boyfriend, who literally was abandoned by the gods because of the consequences of the quests they forced on him started catching up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm Percy is treating the gods with a lot more care than I expected, I honestly expected him to completely hate the gods that abandoned him. Also, Percy is going to need to be a hell of a lot stronger to defeat Thanos, I hope he gets some buffs. The whole situation with Carol isn't sitting well with me. I think it's because it hasn't been made clear if she got close to Percy because she was ordered to, or if it was her own desire. If it was her own desire, and she merely waited for a chance to do her duty, then I can accept her actions and reasons. If she purposefully sought out Percy because she was ordered to, their entire relationship is now a theatre of lies. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He might understand why she had to leave, but he would utterly and completely despise the fact she was an undercover agent that I'm guessing was ordered to get close to him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So... what was the point in the canon rehash? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok... surely after all the bullshit percy has been through, he would never help or trust anyone from the government or Olympus again, right? Like, thats the only logical conclusion to the amount of bullshit he's been through. Hmmm bit convenient that Shield just so happens to come to his rescue, their not exactly known for their gratitude. Im going to guess that Shield was the ones that caused his imprisonment to make him easier to recruit. The real question is, why would percy want to protect America after seeing just how much of a sham it all is? He literally got completely stripped of all his rights, assaulted by officers, put through one bullshit kangaroo court of a trial, then imprisoned for a year and put into solitary for months for daring to protect himself. Ok so annabeth is a bitch, damn. They literally abandon Percy the one time he needs their help, and yet she can't even consider for a second that maybe the gods dont deserve their worship. I know its utterly dumb, and would absolutely get Percy killed, but gods I want to see a scene where Percy is commanded to appear before the gods, and Percy follows along only to announce he only came for a single purpose, spit on the ground, and leaves. |
![]() ![]() ![]() knowing how shit Percy's luck is then that isn't unlikley to actualy be Gaia. even though it was instigated by a mind bender. also knowing Percy's non existante luck then Jean is going to end up turning into the Dark Phoenix and that will just fuck him up even further. |