I see that you like the 1969' Mustang, Percy have it too in "One-seven".

Excellent taste.

Interesting start

More plz

The German parts are a little off. It is "Grüß Gott" and "Du bist verletzt mein Freund". Otherwise really good story.

Percy,s lovelive is to disappointing.

Why!add Moore I love it
P.S if you ever need help I can give you some!
Well many not
IDK

percy flling in love with every womrn ho ive him the slightest bit of love seem stuipdly out of charcter for him also wish you killed annebeth because her dropping percy over he lightest problem is kinda bull

Percy is way too docile in this. He doesn't put up a fight when they arrest him because "my family will suffer for it," They're the government, they can't use his family against him like that. This whole start is a painfully contrived set up for percy being a shield agent that only makes him out to be a bitch.

I definitely prefer when Annabeth is dead in your stories. All the other ways you use to take her out are just extremely out of character for her. Whether you like her or not, at least try and make it make sense.

Asdfsgahhah omg this is so good I’m DYING and I cannot wait for the next part!

Not bad. Not bad at all.

Its been 2 years pls update

Please please please please please update! It's been aeons and I love this story. Please don't abandon such a good fic.

Ok im not gonna kiss your ass, Im going to give a honest review for people wishing to read your works. They arent the best by any means, they have flaws and they arent perfect some things dont make sense and others just dont fit and yet... I would highly reccomened reading most of LilDrummerBois works, because while they may not be the best in any catorgory i've judged them by, they are incredibly unique and provide alternative and interesting storylines that are simply fascinating to explore. So if your looking for something that will not your socks off or truly make you connect and feel like your part of a character then these stories probably arent for you. But if your looking for a unique and interesting adventure exploring stories and perspectives not many people cover then this guys works will be perfect for you. Thats why i keep coming back because depite their flaws they are highly interesting stories. Keep up the good work man.

This was a pretty good read. I started reading mostly because I was curious. I started with one chapter, then I read another, then another, now I'm done. Worthwhile story to indulge in.

If you have plans to continue, you should. I would read, you did an amazing job with this.