Reviews for Ascension of Earth's Guardians |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Binged in two days need more |
![]() ![]() Love the New Council and the desperate moves of the Reapers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I've had fun reading this, and I can tell you have had fun writing it, with all your eggs, references and what not. I look forward to the next chaps. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Only on chapter 2 but this is good! And well written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start on this story. |
![]() ![]() Nice writing. Please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly this fanfic has been a rollercoaster ride to read and a blast. The Fic has its highs and lows and I still do not know if I like it or not. I do know two things and that is wanting to read the next chapter to find out what you have in store for next and that the Orion Republic is just sick and awesome. Gonna follow for now. :D |
![]() ![]() For a moment there I thought the Commander was going to proclaim the first galactic empire :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, you really have a hate-on for Asari, don't you? |
![]() ![]() Terminator reference, A Bolo reference, and a Star Wars reference. So are we going with overused and underrated references now are ye? Good so far, but it could use improvements with experience. |
![]() ![]() ![]() crap, ok this is weird compared to what i'm used to read most than anything with tevos behavior, seeing this it's obvious she will be the new saren the shepard scene on torfan i don't know if laugh or being disturbed with how psychotic she acted what i don't understand is why humans are calling themselves klingons heck their "first contact" it came to me as big trolling moment And well Sovereign reaction got me laughing my ass off grammar and spelling where good and all that but i would sugest using break lines when you change the scene or at viewpoint, no counting that i don't know why this story have so little reviews, cause the plot is decent, you put a lot of good ideas and is better than a lot of the crap on the site, heck you update regularly so... i have no fucking idea why don't you have more audience and reviews... |
![]() ![]() ![]() what happened to the Quarains in between chapters? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, Tevos has been acting weird throughout this whole weird situation. She was a little too blasé in the second showing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is getting interesting and different, I like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying on reading this! |