Reviews for Legend |
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Reader chapter 12 . 10/31/2021 Absol is pretty interesting Funny how only Harrison got a non-Dark type of the 4 Wonder what nickname Ritchie will give Shiftry? Cynthia feeling jealous of Ash choosing Steven over her was amusing And now begins Team Rocket's Attack on Anne |
Reader chapter 11 . 10/31/2021 Ash vs Misty was good Misty scaring everyone with Gyarados was funny Her jealousy at Cynthia was interesting Praise making Magikarp evolve was funny Harrison was very cerebral with Ash Hope he learns from it |
Reader chapter 10 . 10/31/2021 Silver as a Fire type trainer was funny because it matches his hair color Ash now has a fully evolved Psudeo Legendary which is awesome Ash getting a Gyarados was expected though thought you'd go the salesman route Looking forward to Ash vs Misty |
Reader chapter 9 . 10/31/2021 Ash meeting Cynthia is interesting Ash vs Casey was good though surprised to see her as a trainer right Silver will be an interesting opponent for Ash |
Reader chapter 8 . 10/31/2021 Kept thinking that Morrison was the Hoenn one from AG and Jimmy the Johto one from Chronicles Battles were good and interesting to see Ash trade Magneton for a Lairon Will be awesome if can get it to Mega evolve as an Aggron |
Reader chapter 7 . 10/31/2021 Ash and his hero complex Ryhdon evolving was awesome and Magneton is an interesting choice for Ash's electric type Will it reach Magnezone eventually? Would've preferred Jolteon though Mewtwo or Thanostwo? |
Reader chapter 6 . 10/31/2021 Sabrina in the Kanto Elite Four is interesting as definitely has the strength Who's the Saffron Gym Leader? Her dad or Will (Johto Elite Four)? Or is Saffron Dojo back to Fighting Type Gym status? Ash is basically Shirou Emiya but without the Hero of Justice dream to use as a crutch for his purpose |
Reader chapter 5 . 10/30/2021 Crawdaunt is an unexpected catch Think a Dark type with a more diverse second would've been better for Ash Harrison being in Kanto is interesting and will be a tough opponent Ash vs Surge was good though too bad couldn't include Bagon for electric type resistance Maybe use against a Magneton to beat with Ember |
Reader chapter 4 . 10/30/2021 So it's basically a Mega Charmander X Will be interesting to see how Ash trains it Bill was much more interesting here then in the anime or games Giant Dragonite also appears |
Reader chapter 3 . 10/30/2021 Paul appearing early and being a vet while Ash is a rookie is interesting plus clashed with Team Rocket Ash vs Sensational Sisters was interesting Dewgong is a bad match up for Ash with Pidgeotto and Bagon but he pulled through Poliwhirl evolving was good but doesn't Vaporeon also have Water Absorb ability Poliwrath would be best choice for Ash and could use in P1 if do the tournament |
Reader chapter 2 . 10/30/2021 Ash vs Samurai was one sided as expected Ash vs Brock was good Rhyhorn is an interesting Pokémon to give Ash Would have expected Larvitar given the theme of Ash getting a Pseudo legendary with Bagon and now Metang Though Metang feels too early of a catch for Ash right now Might have been better for Derick to give Ash a Beldum since the Beldum colony in Mt. Moon seems random |
Reader chapter 1 . 10/30/2021 Pretty hectic start Pikachu puts Ash in coma and Oak takes him back for safety was not how it expected this to do I've read a few Pikachu abandons Ash to the Spearow's story but not one like this Ash getting Bagon for a starter is awesome though as is one of the most ambitious Pokémon for an ambitious trainer like him Does the camp memtion mean Serena will appear? Ash batting Ritchie on day one was interesting Expected Ash to run into the mentioned Scyther and catch but oh well Zubat is a weird Pokémon for Ritchie but he's more then capable of getting it to a Crobat For someone wanting a team of dragons he sure quickly decided to catch Poliwag and the shiny Pidgeotto Will he invest in dragon egg group Pokémon like Gyarados, Charizard, Arbok, Sceptile, Milotic, Seviper, Scrafty, Heliolisk and Salazle You mentioned Gyarados and Charizard but there are others like the ones listed to still give him type diversity |
deoxeyses chapter 38 . 10/30/2021 Nice |
One above chapter 38 . 10/24/2021 I really hope you all can get around to this story again I just thinks it’s a great read so far and the future chapters would doubtless be the same |
Bouzni chapter 38 . 10/20/2021 Hello ! Just finished one-shoting your story, loved it all the way through ! Thank you very much for your work. Although, don't you think Ash is forgetting Cynthia a little fast ? You made no mention of calling her since the Battle Tower, and now he feels attracted to Giselle... Someone's gonna be pissed ! Anyway, please keep up, it's awesome ! |