Reviews for Legend
Reader chapter 12 . 10/31/2021
Absol is pretty interesting
Funny how only Harrison got a non-Dark type of the 4
Wonder what nickname Ritchie will give Shiftry?
Cynthia feeling jealous of Ash choosing Steven over her was amusing
And now begins Team Rocket's Attack on Anne
Reader chapter 11 . 10/31/2021
Ash vs Misty was good
Misty scaring everyone with Gyarados was funny
Her jealousy at Cynthia was interesting
Praise making Magikarp evolve was funny
Harrison was very cerebral with Ash
Hope he learns from it
Reader chapter 10 . 10/31/2021
Silver as a Fire type trainer was funny because it matches his hair color
Ash now has a fully evolved Psudeo Legendary which is awesome
Ash getting a Gyarados was expected though thought you'd go the salesman route
Looking forward to Ash vs Misty
Reader chapter 9 . 10/31/2021
Ash meeting Cynthia is interesting
Ash vs Casey was good though surprised to see her as a trainer right
Silver will be an interesting opponent for Ash
Reader chapter 8 . 10/31/2021
Kept thinking that Morrison was the Hoenn one from AG and Jimmy the Johto one from Chronicles
Battles were good and interesting to see Ash trade Magneton for a Lairon
Will be awesome if can get it to Mega evolve as an Aggron
Reader chapter 7 . 10/31/2021
Ash and his hero complex
Ryhdon evolving was awesome and Magneton is an interesting choice for Ash's electric type
Will it reach Magnezone eventually?
Would've preferred Jolteon though

Mewtwo or Thanostwo?
Reader chapter 6 . 10/31/2021
Sabrina in the Kanto Elite Four is interesting as definitely has the strength
Who's the Saffron Gym Leader? Her dad or Will (Johto Elite Four)?
Or is Saffron Dojo back to Fighting Type Gym status?

Ash is basically Shirou Emiya but without the Hero of Justice dream to use as a crutch for his purpose
Reader chapter 5 . 10/30/2021
Crawdaunt is an unexpected catch
Think a Dark type with a more diverse second would've been better for Ash
Harrison being in Kanto is interesting and will be a tough opponent
Ash vs Surge was good though too bad couldn't include Bagon for electric type resistance
Maybe use against a Magneton to beat with Ember
Reader chapter 4 . 10/30/2021
So it's basically a Mega Charmander X
Will be interesting to see how Ash trains it
Bill was much more interesting here then in the anime or games
Giant Dragonite also appears
Reader chapter 3 . 10/30/2021
Paul appearing early and being a vet while Ash is a rookie is interesting plus clashed with Team Rocket

Ash vs Sensational Sisters was interesting
Dewgong is a bad match up for Ash with Pidgeotto and Bagon but he pulled through

Poliwhirl evolving was good but doesn't Vaporeon also have Water Absorb ability
Poliwrath would be best choice for Ash and could use in P1 if do the tournament
Reader chapter 2 . 10/30/2021
Ash vs Samurai was one sided as expected
Ash vs Brock was good
Rhyhorn is an interesting Pokémon to give Ash
Would have expected Larvitar given the theme of Ash getting a Pseudo legendary with Bagon and now Metang
Though Metang feels too early of a catch for Ash right now
Might have been better for Derick to give Ash a Beldum since the Beldum colony in Mt. Moon seems random
Reader chapter 1 . 10/30/2021
Pretty hectic start
Pikachu puts Ash in coma and Oak takes him back for safety was not how it expected this to do
I've read a few Pikachu abandons Ash to the Spearow's story but not one like this

Ash getting Bagon for a starter is awesome though as is one of the most ambitious Pokémon for an ambitious trainer like him
Does the camp memtion mean Serena will appear?
Ash batting Ritchie on day one was interesting
Expected Ash to run into the mentioned Scyther and catch but oh well
Zubat is a weird Pokémon for Ritchie but he's more then capable of getting it to a Crobat

For someone wanting a team of dragons he sure quickly decided to catch Poliwag and the shiny Pidgeotto
Will he invest in dragon egg group Pokémon like Gyarados, Charizard, Arbok, Sceptile, Milotic, Seviper, Scrafty, Heliolisk and Salazle
You mentioned Gyarados and Charizard but there are others like the ones listed to still give him type diversity
deoxeyses chapter 38 . 10/30/2021
Nice
One above chapter 38 . 10/24/2021
I really hope you all can get around to this story again I just thinks it’s a great read so far and the future chapters would doubtless be the same
Bouzni chapter 38 . 10/20/2021
Hello ! Just finished one-shoting your story, loved it all the way through ! Thank you very much for your work. Although, don't you think Ash is forgetting Cynthia a little fast ? You made no mention of calling her since the Battle Tower, and now he feels attracted to Giselle... Someone's gonna be pissed ! Anyway, please keep up, it's awesome !
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