Reviews for A Second Chance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() There is another who could help, that's his step mother Carla. Have her eat one of the other shifters and bam we have a royal titan |
![]() ![]() Personally this is my favorite Attack on Titan story you've written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of the best AoT Fanfics ever. The ending was good. You ended it in a great way. Ignore the nay Sayers. |
![]() ![]() I like how in this AU everyone were pretty much OK with Rumbling and didn't tried to stop it |
![]() ![]() I like how everyone in this AU we're pretty much fine with genocide of everyone and didn't tried to stop it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must admit that you pleasantly surprised me with this Ymir's (the Founder one) decision. and even better, Eren won't have to die at the age of 23. and even if the Rumbling only destroyed Marley, the rest of the world didn't even want to try to cause trouble for Paradise anymore, so now they'll just leave these poor souls alone. it would have been a little better if someone had ended up executing Magath, Coslow, Berthold, and Peak for all the shit the Marleans and their pet-slaves did, but unfortunately, we can't have everything good. although, I have yet to read the epilogue, so I will hope until the very end. to be honest, I never thought that you would turn the situation around this way, especially considering after completing the operation on Paradise, Marley had a Colossal Titan left (although, it just seems a little far-fetched to me that it's mere presence reduced the time of their war with the Middle Eastern Alliance by only a year?), but anyway, I'm glad that's how it happened. Thank you so much for this amazing story. btw Zeke's knocked-out teeth deserve a separate like, lol |
![]() ![]() Heh yes let’s have Armin try to get close to her knowing she doesn’t give a shit about anyone and is only there for the mission cliché in every time travel story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even if this is a world with Titans and supernatural powers, I can't suspend my disbelief enough to accept that there "no civilian casualties." Unless that huge boulder landed in an empty field, there's no way dozens if not hundreds of civilians were killed when the boulder landed in Trost, not to mention all of the other heavy debris of the wall launched at high speeds after the Colossal Titan kicked it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really interesting. I love just how far the plot has gotten from canon. Love the effort you have put into the details of the logistics. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very entertaining and absolutely endearing story. I really liked your take on the characters, I think they were very well thought out, and despite your many doubts I found the plot to be brilliantly written. Thank you oh so very much for sharing this with us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() To be fair though, you did still make Erwin tell Historia to gain the Colossal in your other story. The only thing I don’t like about DBD, is the fact that the Titan powers remain. It would make more sense to if A) Ymir appeared before Eren and gave him the choice to get rid of the Titan Powers, while telling him that she intervened during the battle of Shiganshina which resulted in both Armin and Erwin surviving, or B) At the very LEAST offer to get rid of the curse, since she has interfered in MANY of your what if’s as well as your two main stories ASC and DBD. The Titan powers remaining just feels…off. Also, in Jaws of Defeat, I get the feeling that Eren can use this power to spy on Marley through Eldian’s eyes, and if and whenever him and Dina want, they can simply take the Marelyian Titans and leave Marley vulnerable to the enemies of the corrupted nation, thus FORCING them to leave Paradis alone. You could also make Eren manipulate Willy into revealing the truth about the island and what the Warriors did to the island. As for the Eldians on the continent, I think the thoughts you gave Krueger were right; they’ve been brainwashed beyond salvation, and honestly, the only choice they have, is to either listen to Eren Yeager (through the Coordinate) or simply continue to think less of themselves, which is really depressing. |
![]() ![]() There’s also the fact that Eren isn’t planning to get rid of the titans by setting Ymir free. He doesn’t know that that’s an option because Ymir is ALREADY free and is simply messing with the time line. Furthermore, Eren hasn’t entered the paths realm in the story, so he doesn’t know about Ymir. Only that there is no foreseeable end to the titan powers. |
![]() ![]() Wow, I didn’t think you’d be capable of adding the word “cock”, to one of your works, even as a joke. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wasn’t expecting things to end so abruptly but I like Ymir carrying out the Rumbling better than Eren. She’s absolutely done with everything and embodies the desperation of the Eldian race, not having any love for the outside world. Still a horrifying event to happen. |