Hotori would never wink

OMG. I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING, MY POINT OF VIEW ON TOHRU HAS COMPLETELY CHANGED.

D8 *shudder* OH MEH GAWD! The poor little animals... NEVER STOOD A CHANCE! XD Nice one.

Oh, I soooo wanna see Tohru snap! PLEASE CONTINUE!

It was funny, but it seems to me a lot of people forget that Tohru isn't 'genuinely nice'. She acts the way she does for most of the manga because she's trying to be like her father. anyway, this was really funny :) I like that it didn't last too long to get old.

this is really funny, Kyo really does have strange dreams sometimes. I think the story works much better with honorifics, as it showcases how polite Tohru is. One suggestion, though: You may want to make the honorifics not italicized, as it was a bit strange for me while I was reading.

Great story, this is actually the first Fruits Basket fanfic I've read, I'm glad that the first was this good!

Haha! That was hilarious! Great job!

Very cute :)

I especially liked the milk carton bit.

Everything was great. My only CC would be for this section:

"No," he lied. Her voice was eerily sweet, as if she were coaxing an animal to eat from her hand. She stared at him intensely, lightly fingering the tip of the knife. "What are you cooking?" He asked nervously.

Great description and dialogue but for some reason Kyo's reply directly next to a description of Tohru's voice and back into Kyo's dialogue was not as smooth as it could be.

Perhaps, "Her voice [had] been eerily sweet..." would be an easy fix.

Hopefully you won't take offense at my nitpicking. I usually don't meddle unless I'm actually impressed though. So, please take it as a sign of my appreciation and not that I'm a neurotic jerk.

Thanks again

OMG THE MOMIJI THING SCARED THE SHIT OUT OF ME XD it seems like something that would happen in the horror anime called "when they cry" XD

Wow...that was like a horror story. A demented Tohru...I always suspected she might go that route...

Just kidding.

That was really good! I was scared it had veered off into badfic territory during the dream, but as a dream it worked wonderfully! I loved the part where Tohru said 'and we agreed I would have to cook him a twelve-course meal.' That just amused me so much. . As if Akito could eat all that. Anyway yes, great job. The only problem I have is, not that you USED honorifics, those are fine, but that you italicized them. Italics are normally used for emphasis, and so my brain was emphasizing all the -kuns and -chans in ways that just sounded weird. That bugged me, but it's small, other than that great job!

That was just timeless, you know that? Absolutely hilariously timeless. Who knew that Tohru was a serial murderer?

Hee hee...

We all knew that Tohru would snap one day, I just didn't thik it would be that drastic.

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scary and I like it!

LMAO!

Oh very fun read here~

hm, you know, i could see tohru snapping... maybe not eating her friends, but still having a breakdown!

mako