Reviews for On The Pitch |
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![]() ![]() OH! Please don't stop! I read the fifth book too and i still love this fic! I'm so interested in finding out what happens, you can't stop now! And this is nothing like the plot in the 5th book so it doesnt matter that the fifth book came out! |
![]() ![]() No... Don't stop now,i read the 5th book before i read this, and i loved it. Please dont stop :( |
![]() ![]() pls get tha next chap in soon! cant wait for it! |
![]() ![]() This is a really good story! You must write more! Please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I definitely don't think that that last chapter was to long. Actually it was way to short. I really think that you have a great start! It's going on my favorite stories list! Just one thing, you said that Kevin Entwhistle was the Ravenclaw seeker, but you made it seem like Cho was too. In the books its Cho. Please clarify. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have read things that have been about 4 times the length of this, and it still hasn't held me as captivated as this story does. Please keep on writting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! that was great... more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, this is good- keep writing! Especially write the rest of the match- you've got the atmosphere just right!GO GRYFFINDOR! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey keep it up this is a great fic with a great start. |
![]() ![]() Amazing! You completely captured the essence of Ron and Hermione, although I do have a hard time picturing Harry in the role of quidich captin. Wouldn't it be more likely for one of the older, more experienced team members to assend the role of captain? Wish you had continued the story. I really enjoyed reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story! I really love it, I can't type as much as I want to as its too late, but this story is fabulous and very different, I really like it how Parvati is made part of the plot (and you can spell her name) and I like how well you can characterise people, not many authors can, this is a lovely fanfic and continuing it would be the best! I'm kind of surprised that there arn't many reviews for it, strange, as it surpasses many that have reviews! :) |