|Reviews for Shooting Star|
| Vee4 chapter 1 . 4/12/2003
This was sweet. Nice to see Nobby's softer side explored. You've done a good job with this song fic, as the story also works independantly of the song.
You've got a couple of grammatical errors and puncuation errors and I caught one tense change ("This woman has been saying this..." which should read "This woman had..."). As always I recommend Microsoft Works' grammer program (works automatically by under-lining your mistakes; a life saver!). Also, 2 spelling errors your spell check won't catch: a "him self" which should be "himself" and the very last sentence uses the word "lest" where it should say "least". Keep up the writing, nice to know there are other Nobby fans.