Reviews for Betrayal
delusionallady chapter 1 . 5/10/2003
Well... this is a first.. A First for me anyway. Very interesting start. Okay, I am waiting for the next chapter. Hopefully, I will have time to read do you get ideas like this? It's wonderful to see something new like your fic! I know that feedback is good so maybe I'll review each chapter of your fic! :)
Hiiwaii chapter 1 . 4/19/2003
Terrific! **Cheers**

This first chapter is excellant! I really want to know who this Betrayl girl has transformed into in the future, that's if she has.. I must find out... By reading chapter two! Thankies!
Aimsly G chapter 1 . 4/15/2003
Prologue only? Damnit, write more ;; it's great!
I love ccs chapter 1 . 4/12/2003
That was so asome! You so have to finish it!Pretty please? I'll give you a cookie!