Reviews for Diabolus est Melodiam
Trevion1 Brownlee chapter 9 . 2/6
Why doesn’t he learn bleach techniques like The flash step thing that’s basically short distance teleportation
Trevion1 Brownlee chapter 8 . 2/6
This is just a small nitpick but there is technically a way to make portals or teleportation but realistically no devil in DXD Would be able to pull it off it mostly involves black holes and some were moles and a whole bunch of other theoretical mess
Guest chapter 6 . 1/14
Shit hit the fan real quick
kageknuser2710 chapter 9 . 12/16/2022
Yeah, you've lost me now. Everybody is just getting raped left and right, and some reviews are even mentioning him getting off on someone else fucking his mother in later chapters. Disgusting
kageknuser2710 chapter 5 . 12/16/2022
Good development. Crazy backstory though, you really showed just how dark DxD truly is.
I love that we get to see your take on why Grayfia and Lucifer 2.0 turned out as they did in canon. They've done some truly terrible shit to end a terrible war, and MC's mom got caught as collateral.
kageknuser2710 chapter 3 . 12/16/2022
Wow... If he actually has the power to save her, yet does not... Then he is scum
Shortmike24 chapter 1 . 10/23/2022
what a fucking loser. binder and breeder? are you a rapist? or are you a 12 year old idiot? grow the fuck up
majikss chapter 8 . 10/20/2022
I cannot for the life of me get into this story its so boring
Ragn0r4k chapter 26 . 9/13/2022
I doubt this will ever get revived, but I wanted to add my thoughts so as to have a review that isn't a troll or a flame.

I don't have any opinions on the sexual aspects of the story, everyone has their kink and you can write what you like. Where this story went wrong for me is in its pacing and clarity. Once you started abusing the essence of binding, it became very unclear on what was happening, suddenly cleria was bffs with their group and the next scene she has no clue about their existence. And the flow of it all was very messed up. And you set up plots and yet you resolved none of it in 200k odd words or even set about having a plan for doing anything. No gaining peerage members, making connections or even power leveling. His strength level is abstractly 'strong', all of this was in the end unsatisfying. Slice of life is fine, but not when you set up a massive revenge plot and then pivot to taking your submissive mom with a pet feetish for a walk.
Guest chapter 26 . 8/30/2022
well, the fanfic managed to escape some stuff that was... like the cucking - at least didn't notice anything more about that part.
More chapters could've been welcomed.
Guest chapter 22 . 8/30/2022
what's up with MC not feeling his mother's emotions through the link?
Guest chapter 16 . 8/30/2022
"The level of control I have of over my body is unmatched"
and yet he's that lustful to even trade his own beautiful mother/lover to someone and having his pants nearly bursted just from hearing about his mother's infidelity in the restaurant
Guest chapter 15 . 8/30/2022
You truly should've had put a warning "Cuckolding" in prologue as well. I mean, really.
"only the good stuff", you've said... if by that you'd mean even coprofilia, vore and gore...
indeed it's the rant but you do see that there's a lot of themes that are too specific for some to even consider as "good". Should've mentioned Rape as well, btw

and they still are able to get back to son and mother relationship even while telepatically speaking and nobody listens? really? after everything like this. And idk about any love they could have left - more like lust and roleplay. While MC is cuckolding and sees her in such an elated state.

"my pants were about to explode too"
"I'm even considering accepting Cleria's 'invite' to visit her apartment. I knew that she intends to distract or drug me to have her way with my 'concubine', but it would be a hot thing to see."
oh well we see that MC's a real cuckold - with all the context it doesn't even make me much hard (or even none at all - most likely just the leftovers from the previous scenes). And the drugging part is just broken. And if his mother would be alright with watching and allowing her son/"lover" being drugged while having sex with someone else near him... omg, I'd just leave her back to MC's father and make everyone forget.

i'm almost abandoning this, and it had such a nice start
and MC seems to have removed his focus from revenge and powerups...yet again (like with the mind-controlling stuff while watching his mother be raped... come on, he's a cuckold anyway, right? not that much of a difference, considering that he doesn't really care about women being raped - almost had raped Issei's mom, and getting already 2 victims of centuries rape for himself in harem, 3 if consider the maid who can be mentioned as well as a rape victim - it's unlikely that the maids loved his father's actions that much)
I guess the "demonic" nature is high in MC. Even if he tries to keep limitations on it. But isn't far from failing. He needs some Gamer's Mind essence...
Guest chapter 14 . 8/30/2022
he wants to take Issei in? will he share his women with him?.. considering how lustful Issei is and ogling every oppai... or he'll reapply mind control every week if not day, considering that there's a dragon soul inside and that Issei has a good willpower

btw how does he mask his mother? illusion? and nobody could see through it? I mean he wouldn't be able to stop someone from spreading the news who realises who she - it is the city. Like that exorcist ring which can feel MC's presence.
Guest chapter 13 . 8/30/2022
the more we get to know about the mother the less appealing she becomes. Participated in orgies, hmm? I wonder if there'll appear some sort of info for the MC to start losing the attractiveness to her and feeling the disgust. While there's been some before, but one was being stupidity, the other sub-training (but at least by only one woman), then it was centuries of rape (but that was by one... or maybe not one(?) person). I mean MC pretty much feels alright to get her a someone as her partner already and I expect there'd be more and more of those later on... Though yea, it's somewhat difficult anywa to consider someone of her history as one and only for oneself and thus pretty much give her to another one and find himself someone better.
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