Reviews for Diabolus est Melodiam
SMB chapter 24 . 3/21
Plot progression? It's f**king garbage. It has nothing to do with the story. It's all useless nonsense that changes nothing. Chapter after chapter of nothing but wasting time.
The Light Hunter chapter 26 . 12/31/2023
this fic is quite interesting, but too many oc and the plot is too slow
Okami2312 chapter 21 . 12/16/2023
The implication that Riser is such a giant fucking pompous asshole because he has chuuni and never really grew out of it is fucking hilarious.
it also explains why the girls in his peerage actually like the guy they probably know about it and think it’s cute so they go along with his fantasy and giggle about it while calling themselves the peerage of the « great riser » hell it even explains why they’re all weak by themselves but strong together.
Oh my god this is now my new canon.
VamPyr00 chapter 13 . 10/12/2023
More and more OCs and Crossover characters...I feel like the plot is stretched too thin at this point. There are too many things going on in the background with almost no cohesion with the main plotline (MC POV). Meanwhile, the MC hasn't even reached teenager status yet...honestly, there needs to be a BIG time skip by this point.

The smut in the story would also be like over 9000 times better if the MC was actually able to fuck the girls he is with. As of right now, we've been reading what basically amounts to a no penetration, incest, shota smut. It gets kind of boring after the first couple of times.

Not to mention how the MC is basically the only person in the story that HASN'T fucked his mother. If she's supposed to be the main love interest, stop alluding to her being fucked by other people. So far, we've seen her fucked by the abusive husband (numerous times), Grayfia Lucifuge (numerous times), a medieval orgy with humans, and even seducing Belinda. In fact, she seems to take more pleasure in fucking Belinda than she does the MC at this point, since it reminds her of Grayfia. It's kind of sad...
VamPyr00 chapter 12 . 10/12/2023
Why didn't they just meet up with Cleria and her peerage and run the town together? Why all this madness? Also...did Abby just rape that poor girl with the massive thorn dick? The shitty husband deserved that but not poor Cleria...that was completely uncalled for, even if they were going to kill her.
VamPyr00 chapter 10 . 10/12/2023
Pfft, interlude? Should have just named it lemon or smut. There was no 'interluding' happening here.
VamPyr00 chapter 9 . 10/11/2023
Argh! Why are the best parts of the story being left out?! You cut the scene where Elias meets Sona and Rias short, then cut the scene with Silvana Purson short, THEN didn't show what Sona wrote in her letter (which would have probably been adorable!), and you are constantly introducing new characters! Just focus on Elias and write the good stuff man!

Also, I have to admit to being pretty confused on the last scene. It's good, of course, but I have no idea who this Nadia chick is at all. I googled it and it looked like some tv show I've never heard of. So we now have DxD, One Piece, TWILIGHT, and Third Eye? Seems like a pretty weird mixup.
VamPyr00 chapter 7 . 10/11/2023
Feeling extremely spiteful? Chop little Milicas' head off and hand it to Grayfia. Then, chop Grayfia's head off and show them both to Sirzechs while smiling 'affectionately'. Ah, grimdark horror :D

On a side note, couldn't he just revive the original Leviathan using the remains and his Essence of Binder, then use them as a personal bodyguard/hitman? He could probably also revive the rest of his family since he can use heirlooms or something as well, according to the description.
VamPyr00 chapter 6 . 10/11/2023
Yeesh...gotta say, this story is fucking nuts. Really like it so far though :D
VamPyr00 chapter 1 . 10/11/2023
Ooooooooooofffffffffffffff...
Robbler chapter 5 . 9/19/2023
I am so utterly disgusted...
That man is from our world. He should know better.
And for a mother to defile her underaged son...
vincent.air chapter 6 . 9/9/2023
Essence of archmage - intelligence beyond genius.
Essence of warlord - indestructible will.
What went wrong and why are we forced to watch a pathetic, stupid, constantly panicking and weak-willed cuck? Look at the "deal with the devil" and compare your hero to it. All I see is a botched abortion victim who forgot about the essences because he thinks too much about his mother's boobs and the possibility of transmitting her feelings to himself when she is raped by his father. What the fuck is wrong with you?
DrTravia chapter 6 . 8/18/2023
chapter 5... when "fuck that guy in particular" should be the chapter title.
mandvisahuxx111 chapter 7 . 5/13/2023
Shouldn’t it be devil trafficking
mandvisahuxx111 chapter 7 . 5/10/2023
You can imagine his mother as mobeus from helltaker
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