Dantalion power is scan

ohhh nice teach rokushiki

This whole situation could have been avoided if MC had worked his magic better, especially Naruto's illusions.

just literally use illusion on everyone and you could buy yourself a good time

Honestly I'm very disappointed about the cyoa with the exception of Black, archmage and warlord

Plot progression? It's f**king garbage. It has nothing to do with the story. It's all useless nonsense that changes nothing. Chapter after chapter of nothing but wasting time.

this fic is quite interesting, but too many oc and the plot is too slow

The implication that Riser is such a giant fucking pompous asshole because he has chuuni and never really grew out of it is fucking hilarious.
it also explains why the girls in his peerage actually like the guy they probably know about it and think it’s cute so they go along with his fantasy and giggle about it while calling themselves the peerage of the « great riser » hell it even explains why they’re all weak by themselves but strong together.
Oh my god this is now my new canon.

More and more OCs and Crossover characters...I feel like the plot is stretched too thin at this point. There are too many things going on in the background with almost no cohesion with the main plotline (MC POV). Meanwhile, the MC hasn't even reached teenager status yet...honestly, there needs to be a BIG time skip by this point.

The smut in the story would also be like over 9000 times better if the MC was actually able to fuck the girls he is with. As of right now, we've been reading what basically amounts to a no penetration, incest, shota smut. It gets kind of boring after the first couple of times.

Not to mention how the MC is basically the only person in the story that HASN'T fucked his mother. If she's supposed to be the main love interest, stop alluding to her being fucked by other people. So far, we've seen her fucked by the abusive husband (numerous times), Grayfia Lucifuge (numerous times), a medieval orgy with humans, and even seducing Belinda. In fact, she seems to take more pleasure in fucking Belinda than she does the MC at this point, since it reminds her of Grayfia. It's kind of sad...

Why didn't they just meet up with Cleria and her peerage and run the town together? Why all this madness? Also...did Abby just rape that poor girl with the massive thorn dick? The shitty husband deserved that but not poor Cleria...that was completely uncalled for, even if they were going to kill her.

Pfft, interlude? Should have just named it lemon or smut. There was no 'interluding' happening here.

Argh! Why are the best parts of the story being left out?! You cut the scene where Elias meets Sona and Rias short, then cut the scene with Silvana Purson short, THEN didn't show what Sona wrote in her letter (which would have probably been adorable!), and you are constantly introducing new characters! Just focus on Elias and write the good stuff man!

Also, I have to admit to being pretty confused on the last scene. It's good, of course, but I have no idea who this Nadia chick is at all. I googled it and it looked like some tv show I've never heard of. So we now have DxD, One Piece, TWILIGHT, and Third Eye? Seems like a pretty weird mixup.

Feeling extremely spiteful? Chop little Milicas' head off and hand it to Grayfia. Then, chop Grayfia's head off and show them both to Sirzechs while smiling 'affectionately'. Ah, grimdark horror :D

On a side note, couldn't he just revive the original Leviathan using the remains and his Essence of Binder, then use them as a personal bodyguard/hitman? He could probably also revive the rest of his family since he can use heirlooms or something as well, according to the description.

Yeesh...gotta say, this story is fucking nuts. Really like it so far though :D

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