Reviews for Diabolus est Melodiam
Re Lovely Lover chapter 11 . 10/13/2020
Wait? Why the fuck is it Grayfia the one he hates but not Sirzechs? Grayfia didnt seem like she wanted to di what she did. Yes she betrayed her and hating her is fine.

But not hating Sirzechs who was behind it? Who needlessly displayed her brother's needlessly mutilated body and thrm whipped out her mothers severed head with a smile before happily introducing her to her tormentors and master for the next few centuries. None of which was necessary as she wasnt even a combatant.

Yet he says he doesnt hate the scumbag and wouldve treated a non combatant enemy the same way in his position?

How the fuck is that a thing?

That somehow because he didnt add on to her suppression theres also no need to hate him? He was fully aware she didnt want to fight and was a non combatant. Also that Grayfia completely and utterly trained her to be submissive. His cousin completely happy to break her and take advantage of that and likely update him on how well hes handling her till there was clearly no need to bother paying attention.

The trauma he likely gave her himself with her mutilated brother and mothers head on tol of the betrayal likely guaranteeing she broke and he needed little effort to maintain her training. He had no reason to step in and torment his cousins new property.

I'm completely baffled the MC doesnt hate him. I dont understand the reasoning at all. I'm not raging or angry or anything I'm literally just so completely confused about this.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 5 . 10/13/2020
Well that was extremely unpleasant and it was clearly meant to be. I'm rather sad that Gtayfia was made out to be such a scummy person. She didnt have to take that path even if she didnt want to she did.

Sirzechs needs to die a painful horrid death and not one of those super quick ones that the main bad guys tend to get.

Usually the minions die quick, painfully, or suffer horribly for interrogation or some shit. Then when facing the main bad guy it's a big fight with a quick death blow. The only suffering being the injuries in the battle along with the MC.

In thos case those vile actions deserve extreme suffering. And not the suffering where his loved ones are tortured horribly to make the bad guy suffer and then land a death blow when distracted from rage because the big bad is too powerful to directly make suffer.

Blah.. I'm ranting. That shit was fucked the hell up.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 3 . 10/13/2020
I say trip home up when hinting making sure it's nothing fatal. Just a distraction and as he lands the killing blow he severs the bastards penis. Pulls it into the shadow and destroys it.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 2 . 10/13/2020
1) Ah shit. I forgot one thing for chapter 1. If he only read to the point where the swords come up and only watched up to episode 4. Then was it the fanfics that made him aware of Ophis and the others?

2) How is no one sensing him flaring demonic energy from within the house?
Re Lovely Lover chapter 1 . 10/12/2020
1) I've never liked the reincarnation ones that aren't actually reincarnation and someone else gets to enjoy to enjoy what should be the others benefit.

Openings like that are just massively unappealing for me. Going to keep reading and check the story out but that just sucked ass.

2) I completely agree about that little shit Issei.

3) I've only come across 1 story ever that mentioned the MC being a genius or skilled at tactics and such while actually coming through with the character seeming that way. Every other one failed miserably and almost always have them do the dumbest shit you'll e or see or read.

4) I wont comment on those... abilities beyond what I said on #3 and that it seems kind of messed up and sad that the children growing up in a matter of months to adulthood didnt have the choice of being optional listed.
ChangeMe4574 chapter 26 . 10/9/2020
...I was not expecting a story like this. Your gamer fic is what pulled me here. But this... isn't my cup of tea. If the Ranma SI moves to become as much of a sleazebag in the future, I hope you give a fair warning at least.
RyuuyaOoguro chapter 1 . 10/7/2020
the best power... porn physics! salute!
thornjaylon chapter 3 . 9/30/2020
So he's pretty much a Nara trying to make a restriction or gravity seal from naruto?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2020
Every single essence is all right, except for the Essence of the Breeder.
It's basically a power that passively/actively manipulates other beings emotions. Just like that piece of shit Heartbreaker from Worm.
'Drawing members of the opposite sex toward you'.
That just gives of rapey vibes.
The ultimate ideal of sex appeal is very subjective.
Rei chapter 26 . 9/14/2020
Has history been abandoned?
JustDusty chapter 19 . 9/9/2020
You corrupted my poor innocent mind and now you've managed to contaminate me with your fetishes
BumpsOnRoad chapter 26 . 9/6/2020
What happened to the succubus Mei in Cleria's peerage? Is she gonna become a member of Elias peerage? Oh and please continue this story.
AnimeA55Kicker chapter 26 . 8/29/2020
Well this has been a helluva read, and I have enjoyed it immensely. I hope this story is not abandoned and you will one day continue it.
Agent chapter 26 . 8/14/2020
-pokes hopefully-
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2020
Damn, this story didn't even reach canon, fuuuuck.
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