This fic had me on the edge of my seat! It was fantastic. I really hope that this fic continues.

I just can't believe how monumentally empty these beliefs/goals are, the strong should rule the weak. And entropy? He's planning on creating a new empire after prattling on about entropy? It's just so stupid.

You'd think he would want the destruction of the current hero society, to expose it's failings as someone who has experienced them unlike Shigaraki. But no. These are the most wishy washy, hypocritical beliefs I've ever heard.

And while it could just be that he's deluded and using it as a crutch to hide the fact he just wants to hit out at the world, nothing has been shown for that to be the case.

To be honest the most surprising thing is that he still somehow has people loyal to him without brainwashing.

I really hope this story isn’t abandoned or dead as I would really love to see more of this. I have reread this story multiple times and enjoy it every time.

Holy shit this story was good. No idea if it’ll ever get finished though.

cringe shit

Well Kaminari has gone from one pool of sharks to another pool of sharks. no doubt Ibarra is going to rip him into million tiny pieces with her steady growing blood lust and violent tendencies, and that will just make the HPSC look all the more wrong.

At this point I hope Kendo is knocked out of the game for good. Not gonna lie, Ass Might made a terrible choice and she is very unpopular substitute for him. Time after time she makes mistakes and over and over, her one night stand with Bakugou & dropping public rating, and her inability to project a strong image to Toga Himiko. After all that she still can't catch a break. Don't get me wrong I love all the drama, but the more I look at her story the more i just realises how much all this could been avoided if Ass Might wasn't..well an Ass to Deku.

Even with the knowledge of her short lifespan, she hasn't learnt her lesson and she still chooses to hide things from her friends and her boyfriend, seriously the guys better off without her, his puppy dog love is screwing with both of them.

I've got a bet with myself that if anything happens to Deku 's friends he'll use the nukes in retaliation, and he'll rebuff Momo and she will go off the rails herself next because she has had her regrets in her private moments.

All things considered this has been a great read but seriously I hope Kendall will stop hiding and lying and just stop trying to be like Ass Might, he saw potential in her but anybody could have it as well.

Holy shit, they have nukes! I didn't see that coming at all, as I thought that he had developed something else that fits more into the world, perhaps without the existence of Humanise, at least I think they don't exist as they haven't been mentioned despite the fact we know that the first and second movies events happened. Anyway, my point is that I thought he had developed the trigger bombs which thanks to Hatsume and Yaoyorozu, they had perfected and created missiles to launch them at targets, which eliminates the need to set-up the bombs before hand close to, or in target areas after which they need to be protected. Instead, they just need to protect the launch site, and once a target is picked, fire.

Such a bomb would not only be an great equalizer as all their enemies rely on their quirks, but since 80% of people have then, it can also be used to credible threaten entire cities, clearing out most people and leaving the actual infrastructure largely intact. It would also be a poetic way to deal with the MLA when(because they will) betray them as they can pick out hotspots, fire and watch as the very quirks they idolize so much are turned against them, killing hundreds of not thousands of them in just a few targeted missile strikes.

As for his talk with Monoma...the man is a demon, the most dangerous kind as he broke him down, and built him back him in a way that he could have never defended against. And by doing so, he not only ensured he wouldn't question his decisions again, nor run off and do something stupid, but he's removed himself from the possible backlash of AFO once they do hit Tartarus as like Monoma said, his quirkless nature is part of who he is, it makes him great as without power, he's managed so much. So he never wanted a quirk, and knows that the odds of someone as selfish and evil as AFO giving him one is close to zero.

There is also the idea that he might know about the risks of multiple quirks leading to an early grave, but that is slim as as they only have the one person, the 4th OFA user as an example of this, and one can't be sure that was the cause of his death. What I'm more sure of is that he knows that Nomu's are reduced to their brain dead state because of the strain of multiple quirks, and he knows that AFO could try and give him multiple to either turn him into his Nomu, or his puppet.

But they still need someone to do it, so he set up one of his men to take the risk for him. Now, does that mean he's throwing him away? No, for as evil and twisted as Izuku is, there is still a part of him that cares, it's just that he's more pragmatic about things so I bet he's still planning some safely measures and failsafes to keep Neito alive and healthy.

Then there is Kendo, who is facing the truth of her situation, that she is going to die in less then 6 months even if she backed out of the fight now. She's...well, to put it bluntly, falling apart as one would when they realize that they're unknowingly sold thier soul and the devil's coming to collect. She might hate All Might for this, at least a little as he doomed her to this, but she also knows that he had no way of knowing as prior to her, not a single OFA user had ever spoken to the vestiges within the quirk, nor did they do research into how one another died, even if Banjo thought his predecessor died young, people die young all the time so he can't be faulted for never looking into the why.

All that comes back to the idea that she was chosen, that she HAS to defeat him in 6 months else she dies as even the first user knows that quirkless people are rare, most fans and fanfic writers have basically accepted that while there are 20% of people who are quirkless, like Melissa and Izuku, most of those quirkless people would be in their 50s plus as most people wouldn't want to have kids with people who are quirkless and those who are born quirkless are generally considered to be lesser which means that it's more likely that less then 10% of quirkless people before the age of 20. So the idea that they could find ANOTHER quirkless student, nevermind one with a heroic heart, at UA or any other top hero school is more fantasy then anything else.

Then there is the fact she's still looking into the why: Why Izuku, Hatsume and Shinso become villains, why three students with no criminal, violent or otherwise questionable backgrounds become the underworld's most powerful players and the biggest threats to Japan since AFO's glory days. What will she find there as I can see during her next outburst, she could easily be pulled into OFA and speak with it's past users, learning more about them, about the quirk, and about All Might.

How will that encounter go, how will they react when they can know theorize that Hikage died from what she is suffering from? What would she do when she learns that All Might failed Izuku, and in doing so, missed him as a possible choice as while he can say what he wishes, she'll easily, out of frustrations and just exhaustion, yell at him that he never operated like that, that he taught her better then that. That he forgot what being a hero meant saving people's hearts, not just their lives as Nana taught him, something he forgot twice when he shattered Izuku's dreams, and again when he didn't back him up from transferring to the hero course once he proved himself in the festival.

With all that leading to this, where one of the few people who COULD use OFA safely is their biggest enemy, one that won't the same mistakes as AFO as he has no interest in OFA and would sooner kill her then try and steal it.

This is such an odd AU, can't even get to the end without 3 different slightly edgy characters showing up to fight the League.

Lots of hopping around this chapter, makes me think the operation is closing in.

I can’t enjoy the canon story anymore, thus fic is a work of art & It’d pay everything I have to see it get adapted.

Seriously, I hope Seraph beats All Might’s embarrassment of a legacy and wins!

Holy shit that was amazing! I saw it was updated just before going to bed and I was just bound to it for 2 hours! The raw emotion during the 'man who sold the world' scene was amazing. I put it on whilst reading and the emotions from the song and the scene worked together perfectly!

I could gush about the entire chapter for a full page, but my favorite parts where
-Midoriya breaking down and building Neito back up, clearly knowing exactly how to keep him in line.
-The mind-numbing dread that Kendo feels and history repeating itself for Nighteye.
-Midoriya not needing to actually be shown to convince Momo, it speaks for how absolute his... charisma is.

Is it pretty much the entire chapter, maybe but holy shit was this good. Well worth the wait!

Really enjoyed this chapter, when you announced on Twitter (X) about the possible release date date being close I checked my messages three times that day on a Sunday, (UK time) and it didn't come in until Monday early morning. Got up and jumped right into this latest chapter, it took nearly 3 hours to finish.

The Kaminari and Yanagi hookup was surreal, I need to go back and re-read the earlier chapters, the tv tropes page says she's an MLA agent.
I guess you can't keep a good girl down. Really enjoyed how you built the emotional tension with Nighteye & Kendo, it was really amazing and sad story about his brother.
Now as mentioned there will be compromises where he will not go far into future, but I'm willing to bet It will not be a factor because he has got a big target on his head without him knowing.
Now Kendo is headed on that conversation with Kengen next, not a good idea since she is a very morally corrupt person and she would rather make her march out there than to let her live her days in peace. And if she learned about OFA chances are she would try to claim that power for little of the commission is left.
I must admit it came as a bit of a surprise that Kyoka kissed her but people have different ways of expressing their affections, surprised Tetsutetsu didn't faint lol. But I understand their worries. it is going to emotionally crush them if and when she comes clean about her circumstances.
As you've mentioned she will speak to Bakugou first. no way he won't hate the irony of the situation, chances are he will trip out if he learns that a quirk person would've been the perfect choice. Izuku, before he became Seraph would've been possibly the same as Canon Deku. Four mini readers they really do hope that Kendo can finally shake the answers out of him, and if she does have a talk with the vestiges I cannot wait to see how it goes, because I'm really really enjoying all the emotional attention building but I think Kendo needs to get angry for her own sake. Because All Might and Aizawa were colossal hypocrites and pig heads. All Might was clearly playing favourites and didn't want to give Izuku the time of day, and now that she and Nighteye need to find a new successor which is not going to be conveniently dropping out of the sky anytime soon. it hits harder that a perfect candidate has become the enemy.
I know it's your story at the end of the day and I have nothing but respect for your creativity, but part of me can't help but wish she will do a T'challa and scream 'you were wrong!'

Really enjoyed the dialogue between Izuku and Neito.
I have to admit that I thought it was unexpected that he would give him the kill order to dispose of AFO, I'm not sure how he's going to get a quirk or if he actually plans on stealing his. As another reviewer said I think it would be amazing if Izuku where to get Eraserhead's quirk, and to punish his vestige by destroying the society and built.

The last part of the chapter had me confused as to what he and Momo were speaking about. at the time I thought it was a component to do with his new suit, turns out that it was in actuality a bomb...A BOMB!?

Just wow, you've really done it again!

If I had to give the end of a chapter a song it would be Nuclear by Ryan Adam's, because if Kendall cannot get her overflows under control she might go kaboom, maybe not in 72 hours but there's no way to say that it won't be colossal next time. And with the Syndicate with their own arsenal of bombs how can you not call it Nuclear?

As always thank you so much for making an amazing story, you said you're going to play boulders gate three and I hope you have a wonderful time. This fanfic has finally worked its way to my number one spot, from my top 5 to top 3 now it's the new champion!
Once again thank you, I enjoyed this fanfic more than the actual canon of my hero academia &I appreciate everything you've done.
(Ps if you reading this I sent a PM sometime ago regarding a side project I discussed with you awhile, back but given that FF net is down with updates and notifications...again, I don't know if you've not seen it but when you get a chance please have a look and let me know what you think)

great chapter

Let him cook now, I can't wait for the actual war to break out, also props on all these psychological scenes really driving it in deep about how manipulative and observant he is, seeing pandoras pride and greed flaring up he breaks him down to get his mind off his want for fame, to then give him that pleasure without letting off that he knew all along. He questioned his leadership; bravo for this chapter has me at the edge of my seat every time

Let him cook now, I can't wait for the actual war to break out, also props on all these psychological scenes really driving it in deep about how manipulative and observant he is, seeing Pandorasb pride and greed flaring up he breaks him down to get his mind of his want for fame to then give him that pleasure without letting off that he knew all along him questioning his leadership bravo for this chapter have me at the edge of my seat every time if the actual MHA could be this fulfilling I might actually enjoy it