|Reviews for A Discordant Note|
| Guest chapter 24 . 9/27
At the end of your Warcraft crossover Harry is given a powerup.
What could such a powerful person do?
How about journey through the multiverse fixing things?
You could start with this world, Donald Trump could do with a Divine Smackdown.
God or Allah or whatever you want to call him/her/it seems to have abandoned us to our folly.
So a story of Harry and Luna fixing things might be fun!
| Guest chapter 23 . 9/27
Aside from my preference for books over TV, when I learned of the way the Lannister's behaved and got away with it I knew that the Game of Filth was not worth watching.
Finding out it sprang from a book series merely confirmed that authors could get rich selling shit and had joined lawyers and politicians ... sad.
I am so glad I am old, the world is destroying itself, I will be safely dead soon, thankfully.
| MrPeaches88 chapter 1 . 9/18
Its such a shame “For The Love Of Magic” was deleted by the mids because thats what got me into this series. It’s fantastically written as are the other two in the series. Keep it up
| DemonDementor91 chapter 7 . 9/18
Hello! Long-time reader and, first-time commenter. I just want to start by saying how much I love your writing style and flow. I think I have read all of your stories, I don't know, at least a dozen times. As this is not the first time I read this part of your story, I am very surprised that I missed it the first time. I had to look up the definition of a word! Color me surprised! Cough Cough, please be aware I have been reading since I was five and have been following the Harry Potter series since its inception. Needless to say, I am slightly well-read. This is exactly the reason that I love reading your delightful brain regurgitating! I don't know about your professional life, but if it is not one in the "art" category (speaking in broad terms), I will be highly surprised. All-in-all, keep up your amazing literary endeavors, and please, for the love of Wells, do not stop spoiling me with your true Art.
| rhalaenna chapter 1 . 9/17
I don't understand the misogynist comment. What I gather from the author is that men and women are different and that women are also powerful in our own way. Our power may not be as blatant as the men because it's subtle but we are nonetheless as powerful as the men. It brings to mind the saying,Behind every rise and fall of a man is a woman. Also if you did not notice in the entire story, no matter how much of a bastard Harry is, he always capitulates to Luna.
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/12
You ruined your story by your rholler stunt, it is Harry's on making
| Nekotamo chapter 28 . 7/8
Aaand done for real.
You know it's funny, I am reminded of another ASoIaF fanfic where a truly evil vampire from Earth takes over Westeros. And he makes things so much better!
Because despite all the people he kills and hurts it is still almost infinitely less than would have been hurt in the canon wars that he sidesteps because he prefers his shadow rule to be stable so he can indulge himself. He has just recently become aware of the threat of the others and has to buff up the kingdom lest the gravy train end.
And your Harry is kind of the same. His actions made the crisis so, so much worse. But given his effective leadership and magical abilities I bet less people died during that apocalypse pileup than died in the wars that the Westerosi caused all on their own with no supernatural aid. He was definitely bad on Essos though, at best you can say he moved their societies forward at great cost.
In fact considering that his presence increased the free folk population by something like a factor of 5 to what it otherwise would have been. And the positive knock on effects trade with Angmar and all the innovations he introduced and crises he minimized it is quite possible there were more people at the end of the black stone disaster than there were people in pre-war Westeros of canon :P
Wild, just goes to show what a massive shithole Westeros is generally.
Off to Metagaming now ;)
| tireddiver chapter 23 . 6/21
Ooh boy. The story was alright, at time actually really good, but there was an issue that started small, but has ultimately grown to the point that i have to stop reading this fic. The author is a massive misogynist. He literally has Harry go on a rant about how giving women the power to vote was a mistake.
| rmw5763 chapter 28 . 6/6
Thank You, this is Awesome. Happy to read the next one. Lol
| Eddie chapter 28 . 5/31
A great end ,a new beginning?
Thoroughly enjoyed reading this epic. Again
| Chadd Hawkins chapter 28 . 5/15
Extremely glad I read this before I saw game of thrones series! (tbh I'm too stupid to read those books)
So great job.
| Ofunu chapter 28 . 4/19
I'm curious why this same story is yet not completed in AO3, is it being edited before you publish it there?
| Drag7 chapter 28 . 4/9
Like the first story, the ending was rather rushed and bounced around in its attempt to put a quick magical solution on to what was previously a long and unsolvable problem.
Blinding and unblinding himself was rather goofy and redundant and the fake and out of character godhood was cringy.
For the most part Harry seemed to possess less common sense and become generally weaker both from the first story and as the second progressed. It’s like he’s getting further under levelled for the floors of the dungeon he’s diving.
I hope that in the next story the enemy or problem faced won’t be one that requires running in circles until the right magical button to press is found, and that the story will be more linear with tangible progression and measurable power curves.
| Drag7 chapter 1 . 4/9
Harry taking the initiative to push other men onto Andrastia and the initiative to push her onto other men makes him a cuck. Her sleeping around without him caring would only emasculate him, but him going out of his way to have other men fuck her makes him an absolute cuck.
Some people are getting all up and arms about some anti women agenda the story has but it pretty clearly goes on to specify that the family unit is what’s important and any division to that is bad. So it would have been better to give families as a whole a vote.
| kageknuser2710 chapter 1 . 4/7
Ugh. Netorase is just as disgusting as Netorare. Why would any man ever share a woman with other men? Adrastia's entire personality is just her having sex with other dudes to gather information Harry can just take through legilimency. She is also magical, which makes it even worse. Would probably have read more if she wasn't involved in the story, but the disgust I feel for her character and Harry's disregard is just too much.