|Reviews for Marionette|
| SolarCloud chapter 1 . 4/14/2003
Evil Cetra. Rarr. o.O' Yes, I thought you might have taken some inspiration from that! It did smack a bit of the 'opportunistic Ancients'. And that really does offer much opportunity for Cloud angst, right? Ahh...Cloud angst...and your ending was quite nice and angsty!
Again, your spelling and grammar are just luffly. Luffly indeed. ..._'
So in short, this fic was enjoyable. No real repetition or glaring errors at all!
| Firestarter chapter 1 . 4/13/2003
scratchs head. it's fine. needs some more varied emotions though.
| noodlepower chapter 1 . 4/13/2003
Oh, what an interesting concept. I liked it a lot. Very angsty. Nice job.