|Reviews for Fire Command|
| Asian Bookworm chapter 1 . 4/22/2019
The fire fighters stole the show! I could practically feel the commander's annoyance when he was trying to deal with everything. All the other characters were funny and had great chemistry with those on their team. Especially loved it when the one helicopter landed because they were "running out" of gas lol.
And of course Scully was going to go evil kenevil to save Mulder lol.
It was a little difficult to figure out the walkie talkie conversation format, but the story was still really enjoyable. Any chance you'll write another story like this?
| lindergail chapter 1 . 8/18/2018
This is great! The characters and their radio chatter is spot on. Summarizes our guys doing something just as crazy as hunting a dragon...or phoenix..., running and being rescued. Avoiding the deus ex trope, because those firefighters already have their story going. Well done. Living in CA during this year's many fires, I think we may have had some dragons...or phoenixes (or is the word like dove that's singular and plural?).
Thanks for sharing you writing!