Reviews for Force Without Balance
NekoElder chapter 6 . 6/9
Mul. Nahl. Dov. (Strength. Living. Dragon). What is the effect of this shout?
AviddReader chapter 19 . 6/8
You know, I don’t hate this turn of events.
Especially the last few paragraphs, they change the meaning of the first 18 chapters completely. I thought this was a OP power fantasy and that was it, but this changes it completely, now it’s a prologue.
I never played Skyrim or watched Highschool DxD, so this was just an introduction to the characters for me. Show the enemy, the goals, the power. I like revenge plots, the final declaration fixed his goals, I like that, not the guys whose all “I’m not nice, I’m evil” and is secretly nice, that’s lame. Tsudere plots are really dumb if it isn’t funny, and this wasn’t funny. I like revenge plots cause they’re juicy, and this chapter promises something the first 18 chapters lacked, it promises what the I came here for, what the first authors note promised. I like that, I like that a lot and I really want to see what’s next…
But I don’t trust you author. You make many promises you fail to uphold. You make promises you don’t keep… we came here for those promises, those of which you failed to deliver
I don’t hate this “reskin”, its promises a good story adventure, I like your writings I’m sure I’d like this too, but that’s not what you promised. The people were promised Skyrim overpowered character meets high school DxD, the high school is gone and so is the overpowered. This I hate, having no connection to the two materials being crossed over I don’t care, but what I do care is this “MC loses and reboot” changing the story entirely, this is a betrayal of the writer to their readers
So, how can I, we as readers, trust on this new promise. Of a good story. Of keeping old promises. When you betray our trust once and again
You know I really liked that one piece fanfic. It was really creative, I loved how you explored more than what appeared in the show, how you delved into the characters like they were your own. I liked that it was very enjoyable and fun to read, not the dream where he thought he was back into the modern world, you should stop doing that, looking at that was where you stopped writing I’m guessing people dropped the book and I’m telling you, if you haven’t figured out yourself people hate these twists even if it’s a dream like in the one piece fanfic. But that’s not the only problem you made a promise at the beginning, you said you didn’t want to not finish your books like some other authors, yet.
Being a late comer, and seeing that you have dropped the book for over three years now. I knew you failed, being the first one I read I over looked it because your writing was good enough for such things to be forgiven and forgotten but you make a lot of promises you shouldn’t have made because you can’t go through with them, because you couldn’t or wouldn’t.
I like what you have here it’s really good, I honestly hope you continue, it’s such a pity watching these gems go unfinished
You’re not very trust worthy, but a man can have hope that you’ll deliver on at least one of your promises
MonkeyDGabry chapter 10 . 6/3
So you decided ro ruin your story by turning it into a shitty crack fic? Such a fucking waste
PaleFeed chapter 1 . 5/3
Weirdest first chapter I’ve ever read, this guy needs help.
SMB chapter 8 . 2/14
You had a great start and then you f**ked it up with this passive f**king crap. Where's the character we all wanted to see buring the whole f**king world down? He's become a big f**king pussy! Who the f**k wants to read about an asshole that does f**king nothing? It's f**king pathetic. People pay you for this shit? They are not getting their money's worth. For f**k's sake, I'm getting it for free and I'm not getting my money's worth!
simoncarlsson01 chapter 19 . 1/25
I usually don't write negative review on this site (I usually just stop reading and look for something else) to avoid doing so I shall pretend chapter 19 doesn't exist, and didn't ruin half my day by completely derailing the op power fantasy fic I was enjoying surprisingly much up until then. I didn't realize exactly how powerful a dragonborn would be in dxd, lore wise one could argue that the dragons in dxd aren't pieces of akatosh and might not be absorbed by the dragonborn but it's not something I would rule out as impossible even in a more serious fic. I enjoy the mcs powers and him discovering them, if he ate more dragons I'm sure him using them would have been enjoyable to, to bad the story ended at chapter 18. Undead lady was a pleasant surprise of a character as well, a mostly original character but one of my favorites in the fic.
Guest chapter 19 . 12/27/2023
if the tone of a fic is "op" and people are enjoying it, there's no need to apply ordinary literary rules such as needing meaningful conflict, the conflict can come from somewhere else or happen to someone else by using a perspective change, one punch man certainly didn't need the mc to be brought low, by going this route you completely changed the tone of the fic which seems like a betrayal to your usual readers
journeyman3929 chapter 1 . 12/24/2023
miniherc when you were born, the doctor asked your parents if they wanted to keep this waste of dna. your mom said she shouldve swallowed you, and your dad cut of his balls, because he was shocked he produced something like you.
this might seem a little extreme, but I wasnt able to post a comment earlier and im taking it out on you.
MiniHerc chapter 7 . 12/23/2023
Story was good up to 6 but this is just garbage.
MiniHerc chapter 5 . 12/23/2023
Glorious
PandoraOfVanity chapter 16 . 12/11/2023
The mc is actually stupid. But if you turn your brain off you might be able to read this for a while. Well, until you start thinking and realize he might just be retarded
noble6117 chapter 19 . 11/8/2023
Damn, this story just happened and I'm all in for it but what happened
Caluval chapter 19 . 11/7/2023
Carajo, esta historia me pego Fuerte
Si no hubiera sido tan reaccionario, o si se hubiera parado a pensar en sus acciones... No se
Se le dieron poderes divinos, pero no se los gano ni los respetaba, uso y abuso de hasta que dejo que seres mas inteligentes y capaces obtuvieron informacion suficiente para acabarlo, sencillamente no pensaba lo que hacia
Le falto experiencia, con la experiencia viene el cuidado, con mas cuidado no hubiera sido tan idiota de realentizar el tiempo con tanta fuerza, desde ese evento todo fue a peor
Con la experiencia viene la templanza, con tanto poder pero sin la templanza para equilibrarlo se le desperto un sadismo inecesario, si hubiera matado a Issei directamente sin tanto teatro hubiera evitado que aika terminara en la posicion que estaba cuando Seth aburrido la ayudo, lo que termino en la destruccion de la escuela, y en todo lo que desenboco
No tenia ningun objetivo, sencillamente era poder desenfrenado
Me pego muy fuerte esta historia, ojala la continues... o no, es un buen final
Perdio todo el poder que se le dio gratuitamente, pero puede recuperarlo, unicamente si se vuelve fuerte por si mismo y se gana el poder que antes poseia
Indendientemente si la continuas o no, gracias por esta historia
Guest chapter 6 . 10/26/2023
I love your characters. Which says a lot about me if I'm being honest, but I love them...

Although I do find the thought of turning them into femboys and fucking them into submission disturbing. is that disturbing?
VamPyr00 chapter 19 . 10/24/2023
That ending was fucking terrible dude. All that hype about him being so powerful and he ends up beat by a bunch of fucking racist idiots. Pathetic. I didn't even bother reading the rest of the chapter after realizing that he actually DID lose that fight. What a fucking waste of time. I'm not even going to bother rating this, as I feel that EVERYONE would be utterly disappointed by this ending. My only suggestion to future readers is to stop reading at chapter 17 if you don't want to be disappointed.
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