Reviews for What's Her Name in Hufflepuff
DVolk67 chapter 31 . 6/22/2021
If tomorow they would say "Pandemia is over" it still would be the second great news after your "What's Her Name in Hufflepuff isn't abandoned".
akwky chapter 31 . 6/22/2021
I'm just passing by to wish you a great day! :-)

This story has the warmest, most cool main protagonist I've encountered in fan fiction so far. I had a great time reading it!

By the way, I have some difficulties reading, in general. Year ago, I built a device aiding me to read way easier. (And since nobody wants to listen about it, I'm ranting about it here, ehm.) This was the first large story I was able to discover this way, and for this, it will have even more special place in my heart.
Also, I'm currently re-reading the story by practicing touch typing, using it as a source material. I love it. :-)

(In some crazy way, I'm hoping that by writing all this I can somehow repay you the tons of joy and warmth I received from reading your story.)
Bisque-Ware chapter 31 . 6/19/2021
Lol, this is a hilarious story. The part in Binn's class was really well done. Very nice comic effect. Also with the scrunchie tsundere act. Thank you for writing it, I hope you continue on.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2021
Amazing story, really hope you continue it!
Peachstar36 chapter 31 . 6/6/2021
I really love this story I hope you continue to update it!
AshlynWinchester chapter 31 . 5/18/2021
Pls update. This is a wonderful story. Again pls update, soon
AshlynWinchester chapter 29 . 5/18/2021
you mean path of life... just remembered Kakashi
Guest chapter 31 . 5/9/2021
is this still being updated somewhere else?
Purple Pendragon chapter 31 . 5/2/2021
Please continue this story, it's absolutely awesome!
Lurker chapter 31 . 4/30/2021
I've been re-reading my favorite parts of this story for the last couple days & really I just need to bring this up.

"Should I finally go to Dumbledore?

My heart started to race. My classmates started to blur. My hands felt numb and I nearly dropped my spoon.

I… didn’t have to go tomorrow. I could still plan a little. I still had a little time to prove to Dumbledore that I can be trusted. That I’m worthy of not getting my memories taken. He didn’t need to saddle me with some random adult who’d try to control my life. ‘Look at all I’ve done!’ I would say. ‘Look at how useful I am!’ You don’t need to erase my memories."

Kasey is scared of being obliviated & wants to prove how useful she is, but Dumbledore would definitely not see her as being useful. Her grave robbing will probably lead to Harry getting killed due to how the resurrection was basically a vehicle in a Dumbledore plot to getting the blood protection tied to Voldemort. If anything, Dumbledore would be tempted to straight up kill her. I say this not because Dumbledore is "evil", but because Harry matters a whole lot to him.

Given, though, you've delivered what appears to be a blood magic tome to her "The Price of Blood", she hopefully has a starting point to work from. I'm guessing it will need some heavy innovation bordering on miracle on her part. I'm also really interested in seeing the emotional fallout in her realizing the unintended consequences of her grave robbing. Her actions are very "loyal" to Harry; I see a BSoD in her future or at least a darker turn.

Anyway, this story is perhaps the best Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read. I enjoy reading a story by someone who read Harry Potter, understood what JKR tried to convey, and has the skill to write a story with that comprehension. Plus, I enjoy reading about Kasey; she's hardworking, fun loving, and friendly. She's also (unintentionally from her point of view) charismatic. She has moments with Hermione, Eloise, Neville, Hannah, Luna, & Daphne that are touching & also ensure that her "friendships that will last a lifetime." I do wonder if there is some conflict with Susan in the future since she is the only one of Kasey's friends not in Spell Club; that is pretty symbolic.
StorminNorman252 chapter 31 . 4/30/2021
One of the best si stories I’ve read
aochibi chapter 31 . 4/29/2021
This fanfic was really fun to read one of my favorite on this site I hope you will continue?
Guest chapter 18 . 4/27/2021
I think Neville is the one who gave her the Valentine Card
Guest chapter 5 . 4/27/2021
YES A HUFFLEPUFF!
Radmar chapter 31 . 4/20/2021
Well, that was fun. I wouldn't mind reading more of this. I don't mind at all that Harry is pretty much absent from the story. And, for some reason, I also don't mind that this is a self-insert story. It is weird, it has never happened before. To my knowledge, I've never read a self-insert story before this one and if I did, I certainly didn't enjoy it.

I wanted to call this review the evil unsolicited construstive criticism thingy, but I am afraid that I don't have much to criticize. But I am sure that I will find something. Neither do I have many contructive things to say. Let's call this evil unsolicited criticism then. If anyone has an issue with that, feel free to send me a bunch of death threats. Wouldn't be the first (or last) time that happened.

Anyway. Main thing that I liked in this story was humor. I laughed quite a bit while reading this. That's rarer and rarer these days, so kudos to author for that.

Next thing I enjoyed immensely was main character's internal monologue. It is both funny, as I mentioned already, and... how do I call it... it inherently sounds female. You know what I mean, right? I can tell just from inner monologue alone that the character is female. I haven't seen that in some time, either. Wait. Was that sexist? Well, it wouldn't be the first time I would be called all sorts of -isms and -ists, so... If that is an issue for anyone, you know what to do.

That scene at the end of first year, where Kasey sang Freddie Mercury song, was just golden. I loved it. I also enjoyed immensely the final charm exam.

I don't remember encountering any grammar issues. The story is definitely well written, too.

OK, let's try to find some criticism. The plot, if it can be called that, is concerned mostly with inconsequential Hogwarts school life. That's not necessarily bad, but it makes the story seem a little bland. But it does add opportunities to improve characterization, which I already implied to be at least decent, if not good. So I am divided over that.

Kasey herself is fine, but she can come off as a bit... Uninteresting? I am not saying that author is uninteresting person. I am sure that she is wonderful and everything. I am just not sure if this sort of person is the most interesting one to fall into magical world.

What else... I got nothing, I am afraid. I am sure something will occur to me the exact second I send out the review as usual, but this is all for now. The story was good. I had a great time reading it, despite my criticism. 8/10 as it stands, with potential to go up.
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