Sirius called a student "barmy" and have better lesson plans for Gryffindors... How is he any better than Snape they are both biased and both favours their godsons...

I hope you return someday ash

I've really liked the story so far. But dammit if the thing she 'forgot' turns out to be the diary, it'll be such an asspull. You don't forget important items like that. Especially if said object is cursed

I'm really liking the work.

Okay, now that was a really cool intro chapter. Looking forward to the rest.

Glad I found this it's probably the best fic I read in a long time. Hope to see it come back.

This has quickly become my favorite HP fanfic, thank you so much for sharing this with us!

Daphne here reminds me of Maud Pie from MLP a bit.

i hope she doesn't tell dumbledore... if she did, i personly think it il be less interesting

One of best fanfiction for HP. I hope You once continue it. Expecting with passion.

P.S. Sry for bad english

I LOVE the little Lost Cities reference with the elf names - that got me lol

I really like this story and I hope that you'll update again soon!

Это прекрасная работа. И она была бы ещё прекраснее, если бы была закончена. Чудесная героиня, отличная история. Возвращайтесь, автор.

I enjoyed the way you built up to her predicament / the extensive characterisation of the fellow Hufflepuffs and the world building at large a lot! You've managed to avoid the usual pitfalls of the SI trope as far as I can tell. Now my only critique would be that I disliked the way you summarised which issues she would tackle in which year and how she thinks she would feel in the future. "Planning ahead" is sensible but having a summary of the story / having her think methodically through the next few years trying to figure out what to change and what not to change in the beginning of the book is a bit weird. If she would have failed immediately afterwards it would have been a different story but her plan seemed to have worked so far so it's safe to assume she'll hit on her points in the future. The fact that she knows at eleven that she won't have any kind of romantic relationship in the next ten years is also weird to point out repeatedly. No one is expecting her to have a serious crush or fall in love. The hp books were fairly action driven and didn't acknowledge romance until book five so it's a bit confusing why she would take it so seriously as an eleven year old.
To end on a good note: I immensely enjoyed the light hearted way with which youv approached the serious topics. The overly cautious parents being represented in a multitude of bear sprays or whatnot was a delightful detail. It's a cool way of acknowledging the darker side for sure!

Im so glad for one of the top reviews warning me away from this. :)