I LOVE the little Lost Cities reference with the elf names - that got me lol

I really like this story and I hope that you'll update again soon!

Это прекрасная работа. И она была бы ещё прекраснее, если бы была закончена. Чудесная героиня, отличная история. Возвращайтесь, автор.

I enjoyed the way you built up to her predicament / the extensive characterisation of the fellow Hufflepuffs and the world building at large a lot! You've managed to avoid the usual pitfalls of the SI trope as far as I can tell. Now my only critique would be that I disliked the way you summarised which issues she would tackle in which year and how she thinks she would feel in the future. "Planning ahead" is sensible but having a summary of the story / having her think methodically through the next few years trying to figure out what to change and what not to change in the beginning of the book is a bit weird. If she would have failed immediately afterwards it would have been a different story but her plan seemed to have worked so far so it's safe to assume she'll hit on her points in the future. The fact that she knows at eleven that she won't have any kind of romantic relationship in the next ten years is also weird to point out repeatedly. No one is expecting her to have a serious crush or fall in love. The hp books were fairly action driven and didn't acknowledge romance until book five so it's a bit confusing why she would take it so seriously as an eleven year old.
To end on a good note: I immensely enjoyed the light hearted way with which youv approached the serious topics. The overly cautious parents being represented in a multitude of bear sprays or whatnot was a delightful detail. It's a cool way of acknowledging the darker side for sure!

Im so glad for one of the top reviews warning me away from this. :)

I think it might have been better to put the Elf Origin tale for the end of the chapter as that was super horrific to read and I kind of zoned out for the rest of it.

Maybe that's just me, though.

I never thought reading about magical boy-band AI getting mutilated would be so cathartic, but here we are.

Nooo! What about the fanfic Beautiful Ice Queen 700 IQ politician Daphne?! Say it isn't so!

Good story

Love this!

Still holding out hope we'll see this story updated soon!

Honestly this is pathetic. She's like a kid drowning in knee high water. Kind of funny but mostly just annoying. Who the hell apologises for racism and tries to cover it up? Also who gets burned, has a bastard for a teach who doesn't care and doesn't plain tell him to fuck off? Really, if she killed herself drinking water I wouldn't be surprsied. There's childish intelligence and then there's this, whatever subpar mockery of a brain she has. This would've been way more suitable if she was a literal toddler, running into fires and having crazy adventures. Forget about stopping Voldemort, I'm already astounded she freed Black. It'd take a miracle for anything else to happen.

Kiddie brain confirmed, there's no way an adult would do something that stupid.

Happy Pancake Day 2022!

Great story!