So far love the tone of the story. Seems to be a criminally under-reviewed fic, so I will be giving out as many as I am legally allowed.

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Chapter note:
You wrote "a Legitimance" instead of "a Legilimens"

Story continues to be fun

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So far love the tone of the story. Seems to be a criminally under-reviewed fic, so I will be giving out as many as I am legally allowed.

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So far love the tone of the story. Seems to be a criminally under-reviewed fic, so I will be giving out as many as I am legally allowed.

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Augh, ive reached the end. Nuuuuuuu. I need more OAO

Did... did you turn Daphne into Maud Pie?

This, THIS is how you write a good self insert fic. Take notes all ye writers thinking to try one of your own. Its funny, its charming, the MC feels relatable

The author does a wonderful job at avoiding the biggest SI/OC writing sins. Like making their SI/OC the twin brother/sister of any of the canon characters. Or being otherwise related to canon characters in any way. Usually that's a Big fucking red flag if you see that in a story description.

Pacing is decent, and there is no needles rehashing of canon events. Plus the SI/OC isnt glued to the canon cast 24/7 but simply does her own thing.

This one goes straight to my favorites.

Me peguei relendo esta história. Não me recordo de haver comentado, então estou fazendo isso agora: esta história é interessante. Gosto da personagem ser desconhecida e não reconhecida pelos personagens principais. Espero que você mantenha isso. Uma crítica: a personagem se esforça demais para ser reconhecida pelo trio dourado. Algo que não há necessidade. Eles se esforça muito para salvar as pessoas quando isso não é responsabilidade dela. As pequenas mudanças são suficientes. Acredito que ela deveria aproveitar muito mais o mundo mágico. Afinal de contas, ela tem magia!

I'm honestly so in love with your story! It's really refreshing to read an isekai style story without the oc actually being a main character for cannon. And I love that she's changed so much! No one ever wants to branch off from the cannon events because of how much could change, but I love all the changes you've made Your depiction of the characters is super spot on and fun to read, I really really liked reading the parts with Daphne, and related to her because I really love rocks too haha! I have a tote bag full of "boring" looking rocks because there's all just regular looking and aren't even different colors or anything, but they're cool to me! My sister even bought me a rock tumbler so I can polish them, maybe there's a magical version of that for Daphne? I love your story so much, it's a shame you haven't updated in a few years (I'm guilty of that myself), but I'll favorite anyway in case you do ever decide to update :D

Will there be a new chapter ?

This is such a well written fic. I hope you continue it at some point. I love the character, the little imperfections and how while she is the master behind the scenes, she is seen as insignificant to everyone else.

Dumbledores letter
that's cool. make up for my previous comment
that said, she's still out 100 Galleons

she totally just fucked Harry's future with the giving of the map to someone not him
not to mention it could probably be classified as an heirloom...or a momento of his DEAD father
pretty shittyveven if it does get sirius out of Azkaban...but there's no guarantee that it will given fudge and general corruption of the Wizarding government
just saying

I love her internal sarcasm about her plan to get the diary in year two.
hilarious

I like your olivander. much less creepy then canon lol