That bit about Alice was very interesting. Wonder if all those missing children ended up in the real world.

Great chapter. The bit with the rainbows was absolutely brilliant and is a perfect example of what makes your so special. It captures that magic (pun completely intended, I regret nothing) we all felt when first reading the books and also gives a perfect picture of how young witches must have felt and acted in such situations (lets be honest, when the time comes that the second-years usually learn that spell there is no doubt that their dorms transform into rainbow houses for weaks on end).

Love this chapter and the story in generall. Don't let the lack of feedback discourage you. I know lot's of awesome stories that have small to very small followers all the while there are other stories that I can generously describe as word vomit that have hundreds of reviews and follows.

The SI is a joy to read, really her new body must play with her mind because she very believable acts like a typical 11 year old girl. Fighting with Hermione over the book; And even better the rainbow marathon, really that is exactly how young girls new to magic would react.

I may be mistaken but I think Kasey just butterflied Draco's entry in the Slytherin Quidditch Team to a year earlier.

Hagrid will ne doubt be delighted to help Kasey and Eloise, I always got the impression he is just diyng to help fellow animal lovers (read:maniacs) out.

When Kasey reads about Alice the artical describes her as a arthimancer, I think you meant Arithmancer (at least that's how I read it on the Harry Potter wiki). Also it's the Mending or Repairing Charm, with the incantation being reparo (again Harry Potter wiki).

Until next chapter.

Oh Kasey you foolish girl. Haven't you read enough fiction to know it's never wise to daydream when others talk to you. Now you have agreed to be member of a boyband fanclub. A rasist boyband at that, admitelly not that much worse than normal boybands. I can't imagine the horrors that await her. Can't wit for the next chapter.

Somehow I think Hagrid would wholeheartedly approve of Kasey's opinion on the women that tried crossbreeding pegasuses and unicorns. Can't wait for the two to meet, I am sure they will be best of friends.

Great chapter.

Kasey really need to watch her mouth. I am pretty sure the only reason she didn't get a detention is because McGonagall secretly (in the part of her mind that she will die before congfessing exists) approved of the comment.

I love your Hermione. You perfectly captured her spirit. She comes of as annoying and know-it-all but only becasue she doesn't know how to make friends and is excited by all the magic. Hopefully Kasey can help her there.

So now our SI is member of a fanclub to a racist boyband. That is usually the point when someone has to revaluate ones life-choices. It's clear what she has to do now. Expose CHARMED4U as the racist's that the are and save countless young witches from their brainwashing ... somehow that sounds like a bigger challenge than preventing Voldemorts return and rise to power.

Oh young Hermione... you did such a good job writing her in this chapter! Also I was feeling the painting with a young woman using a frying pan as a certain Disney version of Rapunzel.

Wonderful story so far, can't wait for more.

Magical boy bands are a thing? Suddenly it's turned into a horror story.

I've enjoyed this fanfic so far.

I only read the first chapter; and I already like it.

fun!

To answer your question - the main character fits in this world like a fist to the eye. Also - magical boybands. The pure unspeakable horror of the SI is completely justified.

I love this story. You somehow managed to truly capture that feeling we all got when first reading the first Harry Potter book. That innocent awe of discovering a whole new world and the beauty of magic. The humor, which is excellent, also could have come strait from Rowlings herself. That bit in Ollivander shop with the pig-phoenix; I almost died laughting right there. The only negative until now is the fact that the SI practically started off with infinite funds, which is very convenient for her, but feels like a cop-out to avoid problems. Please keep this up, can't wait for more.

I am loving her acceptance of her being a Hufflepuff and how it is coming on so naturally.

I have never read a fanfiction as it was coming out before... I usually look for completed ones. But this is terribly exciting and I am really invested in the story.