Where's Hedwig and Harry's trunk?

Ppp

Snape and Harry are British. They would use uk terms. In the uk what Harry was shut in by snape was a wardrobe.
Your chapters are very short. The story is still developing so can’t really comment yet on the quality of the storyline.

This is so gooood

I feel ashamed to say I thought “deliverance” was a real word.
If it is i feel even more ashamed

This was great! Although the disaperating was incorrect. Canonly it’s very unpleasant. And feels like your chest is being constricted, so you can’t breath. (Lol I’m a huge Potter head and know most quotes and rules most people forgot existed)

I was waiting for Harry to call the snake to help him (never mind that the cold would kill any non-magical snake).

Interesting. You may have created what were essentially Inferii before Rowling did. (I'm not clear on the dates of the books.)

Your writing so far indicated that Jeb was greedy for money and enjoyed hurting Harry. I saw (and want to see) no detectable sexual interest. Those who want to see it will, but I did not.

Of course hindsight is 20/20, but Harry could have placed his trunk so the closet door couldn't close.

Also of course, this fic has now been thoroughly canonshafted since we know that Snape can fly. He could easily fly up to some point on the mountain and levitate Harry up to that point, repeating until they reached their goal.

Thank you! I loathe slash and despise the authors who refuse to disclose it up front.

I have no right or desire to control what others create. I have both the right and the desire to control what I read.

What happened to Hedwig? She wasn't mentioned at all after Snape confronted Dursley.

Yes please write the sequel

BOOTIFUL!

I enjoyed your story, and straight onto the next. Thanks for writing. :)