Reviews for Somewhere I Belong
Ducky1776 chapter 2 . 6/17
Where's Hedwig and Harry's trunk?
Robyn Hawkes chapter 3 . 8/3/2022
Pedant chapter 6 . 1/31/2022
Snape and Harry are British. They would use uk terms. In the uk what Harry was shut in by snape was a wardrobe.
Your chapters are very short. The story is still developing so can’t really comment yet on the quality of the storyline.
Ghostq chapter 6 . 11/24/2021
This is so gooood
Ghostq chapter 5 . 11/24/2021
I feel ashamed to say I thought “deliverance” was a real word.
If it is i feel even more ashamed
Ghostq chapter 2 . 11/24/2021
This was great! Although the disaperating was incorrect. Canonly it’s very unpleasant. And feels like your chest is being constricted, so you can’t breath. (Lol I’m a huge Potter head and know most quotes and rules most people forgot existed)
guest chapter 13 . 5/11/2021
I was waiting for Harry to call the snake to help him (never mind that the cold would kill any non-magical snake).
guest chapter 10 . 5/11/2021
Interesting. You may have created what were essentially Inferii before Rowling did. (I'm not clear on the dates of the books.)
guest chapter 8 . 5/11/2021
Your writing so far indicated that Jeb was greedy for money and enjoyed hurting Harry. I saw (and want to see) no detectable sexual interest. Those who want to see it will, but I did not.
guest chapter 6 . 5/11/2021
Of course hindsight is 20/20, but Harry could have placed his trunk so the closet door couldn't close.

Also of course, this fic has now been thoroughly canonshafted since we know that Snape can fly. He could easily fly up to some point on the mountain and levitate Harry up to that point, repeating until they reached their goal.
guest chapter 3 . 5/11/2021
Thank you! I loathe slash and despise the authors who refuse to disclose it up front.

I have no right or desire to control what others create. I have both the right and the desire to control what I read.
guest chapter 2 . 5/11/2021
What happened to Hedwig? She wasn't mentioned at all after Snape confronted Dursley.
Hicctooth456 chapter 16 . 3/9/2021
Yes please write the sequel
PurePreet chapter 17 . 2/19/2021
Marj123 chapter 17 . 1/14/2021
I enjoyed your story, and straight onto the next. Thanks for writing. :)
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