|Reviews for Let's Unravel This|
| Polly Little chapter 1 . 12/22/2018
That ending was wonderfully sappy, and the pure melodrama was a thing of beauty.
| jmsptter chapter 1 . 9/9/2018
JAJSHRROEBE. I CANT BELIEVE I DIDNT READ THIS SOONER WJJWVWKEJE
Sirius and James on the show was perfect
Lily and James meeting was perfect
The ending was perfect
Everything was perfect
You are perfect and a complete godsend wkshksjeje I can't even buhdgljc
| eliminaaado chapter 1 . 9/6/2018
ahaha so sickly sweet at the end I love it
| DancingStars45 chapter 1 . 9/5/2018
OH MY GOD. I think I’ve been reading too much of your works because this whole time I’m thinking “good god they’re going to say they’ve fallen in love aren’t they”. It’s a good thing you’re so goddamn hilarious or I might have thought too hard about that
| MaryLouise1996 chapter 1 . 9/4/2018
| a-perfect-melody chapter 1 . 8/26/2018
so this is fucking fantastic (pardon my french) and I adored this so much.
No kidding, I am actually in love with it
Sirius and Lily being old uni friends and him doing her a favour purely because he loves the drama is perfect.
Also him calling her Red is amazing.
I love the idea of Lily reluctantly working on Jeremy Kyle's until she can get a better job like this is soooo Lily.
Also, Lily and Fabian's friendship I especially liked. It's usually Marlene or Dorcas or someone (not that I don't love them as Lily's friends!) so it's really refreshing to read a story with other people as Lily's friends.
The jily was lovely (as it always is on your stories) and I will definitely be back to reread this.
Thank you so much for this; it made my day xxx
PS: I'm basically binging all your fantastic stories at the moment so you can expect other reviews from me today! :)
| adelekeifeoluwa20 chapter 1 . 8/25/2018
Awesome this was so good
| AMProngs chapter 1 . 8/25/2018
That was a brilliant idea! I laughed so hard! I enjoyed reading this so much. Thank you!
| Escapingthisworldwithfiction chapter 1 . 8/24/2018
Ummmm this is so fucking cute and I love how convincing James and Sirius were on the show lmaooo
| matrixaffiliate chapter 1 . 8/24/2018
Oh, Elle, your a genius! This was adorable and I love it!
| mlpksp2010 chapter 1 . 8/24/2018
OH MY GOODNESS I HAVE SO MANY THINGS TO SAY! firstly, “she could climb him like a fucking tree” is the most iconic line EVER LOL! secondly, thank you thank you thank you for blessing us with this oneshot while eligible is still going on! i honestly cannot wait any longer to see whats going to happen between lily and james in eligible. lastly, your writing NEVER ceases to amaze me! this story is written so so well and i absolutely love it!