and suddenly this Bill Hoel guy's girlfriend is the Secretary of State and not the Attorney General.

what? no "Down with the Sickness"?

...the parents would tear apart the teachers and school board with their bare hands if they so much as thought of allowing an Endbringer to attend their school, dude.

also, enough with the liberal arts cracks. i was a history major. before switching to computer science, anyway.

also, Africa, better weather? meh. i'm from California. THAT is better weather. still have issues with the weather here in PA.

eh. my dad is severely depressed. has been since my mom died, 4 years ago friday. also, bi-polar and has PTSD. the pills his psychiatrist prescribe him help, at least somewhat

"so grab a burger and gun."
I half expected her to add "It's the American way!"

Throw some bombs onto the platform, and she’s got
Bombs
Rockets
Torpedoes

BRRRRRRRTTTTTTTT

People are dying all over the country due to the greed of corporations which have their fingers in every facet of government forcing people to work during a fucking pandemic. Isnt capitalism grand?

Hey all your stories are great. So wheres the next chapters. Oh, maybe you can work up a story of Taylor and her girls getting dragged out of their home and is now searching for a way back. Just an idea something you can get your teeth in.

Tried reading this, wanted to get deeper into it but it's full of a bunch of big dumb jargon that makes little to no sense, Taylor is a mass murdered but that's totally okay I guess, theres no explanation really for how tay got to where she is which really made it difficult to get into. The writing is everywhere, even if its decent writing. I wont understand how people enjoy it, might be because it seems like one of those "crack" fics that doesnt care about the world it's in. Which is fine. But it's a crack fic I wont understand.
If this is something you enjoy writing then good on you, and I hope you continue to write more.

The M-134, the most badass rifle calibur gun around... and it came from General Electric.
"GE: we bring good things to life"

Chapter eight, Taylor got outed by Greg Veder, and the Fallen came after her for opposing Behemoth. Now suddenly you make it out as a great surprise that Natalie (the reporter) figured out who she is; what? Don't you remember your own story? You only ever write the same one. Don't get me wrong, it's a perfectly pleasant one, but only ever the one. Whether it's Reality [sic!] Bites Worm, Worm Castings, Another Path... even that one Constellations omake you managed to turn into "a Selector story". Any variations in your work are only ever cosmetic, so the least you could do is keep track of said variations... that, and make the dialogues less stilted - seriously, your characters don't talk to each other so much as AT each other. In fact, they infodump what I assume is your point of view, in a way that makes them all perfectly interchangeable.

Big brother via bio tinker!

As always...another good chapter, I still like the way this story is moving along. I am still finding it very entertaining and I still like the way it is handling the interplay of the main characters. As before I await in great anticipation to see how it all plays out.

Thank you so much for sharing.

Interesting and (well enough written in my opinion) very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Looking forward to the next post and thank you so much for sharing.