That little turret and the slaying mfer's had me almost rolling on the ground from laughing so hard. I have scrolled up and read the turret part at least four times since I first read it. I can just imagine what it would be saying, if it could say anything.

thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue to update as soon as life allows

I really enjoy your writing. Thanks for sharing.

This is absurd and hilarious.
Great work. XD

Interesting start to what promises to be a good story. I have read quite a number of FanFiction stories, including crossovers, and most have been good. It looks as if it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.

Thanks for sharing!

thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue to update as soon as life allows

Good luck with that research. On the bright side, even if they both get knocked up, the both of them have the means to ensure their kids are healthy and well cared for. Though the rest of humanity can only hope no one is foolish enough to harm any child of Amy and Taylor.

just so you know it is SAAMI not SAMMI. It stands for The Sporting Arms and Ammunition Manufacturers Institute.

Yah! Got to agree with that last statement by Max. Let 'im die. He is literally to stupid to let continue this side of the Veil... Dumb bastard might drag the rest of us over with him when he inevitably goes!

Thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue to update as soon as life allows

whelp sucks to be them :)

awesome

This is basically just no-context, unreadable nonsense.

I couldn't even make it to chapter 2. every other paragraph is 'liberal this, socialism that' or unwarrented violence/plinking of random animals.

for example, there's no real reason given(so far anyway) as to why Taylor would have these thoughts, so it REALLY just feels like Author Bias.

another example is the mini tirade against a "stupid, cunt hole liberal reporter'... the 'cunthole liberal' part is unneeded and pointlessly inflammatory. 'stupid reporte whom has probably never even fired a gun before' still gets the point across without being... hateful, I think would be a good word.

if you write about hot topics like capitalism, socialism, etc, I would suggest framing it as a charcters thoughts. otherwise it feels, to me at least, like author-bias bleeding through.