Reviews for Gun Bunny |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A very enjoyable story. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brian Adam's? |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue to update as soon as life allows |
![]() ![]() ![]() They need to control the narrative, say the PRT is trying to distance itself from Eidolon, lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That makes me wonder did they discover the titanic in worm cannon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() In media res with only naval-gazing on socioeconomic concerns, talking, and bad explanations? That's some amateur shit. You think you're explaining more than you are because you know it all already, but the hints and clues here are poorly paced so as to make this chapter garbage when you were clearly going for something else. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun story but seems too disorganized/chaotic to flow well |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent start to the story, I’m really enjoying Taylor’s “stream of consciousness”. PS: hope that’s the right term |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this took me two days but I read it all! More! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, gotta love Levi's reaction. Though I probably don't want to know how he can see everything on the internet in that way. Ugh... Need brain bleach for all the ideas I just had passing through my mind. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I never knew I needed this so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue to update as soon as life allows |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue to update as soon as life allows |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just binge read this. Part of me is like...Wut? Another part is like...Hell yeah! This has been a hell of a lot of fun to read. Seriously. Looking forward to more. |