Would also love more EPOVs from this one :) you know, if you ever have time or the desire to do so! I’m thinking maybe closer to the beginning? Maybe help us understand the whole Tanya thing to begin with? Or maybe Bella’s birthday?

Such a sweet story with such fun characters. Minus Tanya, she’s terrible.
I would love love love to see your take in a Bella who has more sexual experience, or who had the ex who creates the drama/or intimidates Edward. We see so much of Edwards past being an issue, I would LOVE to see your take on it being the other way around. You’re such a freaking fantastic author :) I would definitely read anything you write, but I’d love this!

I want a best friend like Angela! She is legit the best!

But is Tanya really so delusional? Because Edward totally planned on coming right back to her. That’s what he was hoping would happen initially.

That was sweet and sexy and fun. But wouldn’t you feel kinda icky doing the exact same thing with Edward that he had done with Tanya the year before? Like, same thing different girl? So, really their first time wasn’t unique or special, at all. Which makes me sad.
Edward is sweet and cute when they’re together. And he says the right things. But, he dated a bully for two years. Fake dated the girl who was bullied by said girlfriend just to be able to get her back. Changed his mind about the fake dating but didn’t tell Bella until she had to ask. He hasn’t had to work for literally anything.
I know you don’t write angst. But I feel everything has been so easy for him. Like, rinse and repeat only with a new girl

The thing that bugs is that Edward knew how Tanya treated Bella for so long and just stood by and watched. I’ve always told my kids that if they are I’m that situation, even if they aren’t saying the words they are complicit. So even though Edward didn’t necessarily bully Bella, he stood by and watched which is almost as bad

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Very fun! I have to say my favorite LMAO moment was when Bella was “thinking out loud at Carlisle and Esme’s house. It’s been a while since I’ve read Twi-FF. This was the perfect way to revisit it. Thank you!

That’s some amazing word vomit! I laughed so much I had a coughing fit.

You’re so good at writing Bella! She and Edward are so young and in love, and you convey all of that so well. Thank you for another great chapter.

Awww so sweet. Talk about perfect. Love this.

They are so stinkin’ cute!
PS. Ang’s mom’s comment made my eyes rain tears. I miss my mom.

Ohmygod ohmygod ohmygod, amazing way to celebrate her birthday. Could picture it all in my head. And I agree about the movie— Watching it as a grown up is a very different and cringe-inducing experience in certain parts compared to when I first saw it as a fanciful* teenager dreaming about Jake Ryan. *Love your use of the word so had to throw that in there. ;)

omg I loved this one so much! so so so much!
I love this Edward. I love this Bella. So perfect. I could just go on reading about them if you could have kept writing about them. It was so romantic, swoony and super cute. Maybe you could give us a future take about them attending their own kids football game or something? lol. But I do love where you ended, I'm just being greedy ;D.
Thank you so much sharing this. It was lovely, I had a great time reading it.
-stz

Just right ending. I love their new pact. What a sweet wonderful story!

That was absolutely perfect!