Buena historia

Update soon.

Good Chapter.

As for the comment Erstwhile, I'm actually pretty sure that Ruby would get her own Noble Phantasm as while its true that Scythe's aren't exactly common in the Typemoon universe, there's still the Harpe Noble Phantasm and considering how its essentially a scythe despite being called a sword, its pretty obvious that Harpe is going to be Ruby's weapon especially since assuming she gets the Medusa version, it fits her to a T.

Good chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one.

"Next Update: Fate Sword Order"

Well, I can't say that doesn't fill me with dread. Magus among Ninjas just passed Shirou's sacrificial move, Huntsman of Red V2 shows Archer getting mauled to save someone, and Grand Dungeon is gearing up to face a grand foe. Considering what the latest conflict in Sword Order is, I am not liking his odds.

Anyway, back to HoRV2, if the plan is for Remnant to NOT have a crutch in the form of the "old" Champions, can we take it as Shirou will be pulling a sacrificial gambit to remove a "corrupted" Archer? Or perhaps they're going to ensure the worst-case scenario by having the Huntsman and the Mercenary be corrupted, turning the show of strength that the Reality Marble is into a warning to force the Four Kingdoms to ally with Salem against them, then ultimately against the Gods to free Remnant from their machinations? Or perhaps those two can pull off something like "Overcharging a Phantasm can allow the wielder to pull off miracles, but once and only once" to bring back Glyndy and the others while "sacrificing" themselves to reset the board. Still kinda miffed Ruby doesn't get her own Phantasm tho, but then again there's not much that would work well with her like Jaune

And now what they think is the twin of the Huntsman of red is dead and the shadow take his body.

Alter archer is getting closer, but i just hace an idea..

What about make archer..look like angra. He is a copy, and he has the body of the young shirou, so if he look like angra manyu with his tatoos, then i would think that is a god of dark, all that is the oposite of Shiro Huntsman of Red xd

Beowulf isn't the oldest surviving epic poem, is it? I'm a bit puzzled what did you mean by this.

And I hope this won't be a neverending stream of power-wanky scenes wherein Shirō does something super-duper amazingu and then everybody claps, because that would get boring fast.

When do you intend to post the Fate-Lost Time story?

This might end up a twist. I hope it all works out.

Whiny bitch down here.

This is just so stupidly contrived. I really don't understand how you are unable to realize how needlessly convoluted you make your stories.

I wonder if they will ever see shirous past as a counter guardian

Jeanne don't you mean Jaune

He should have given Raven Gae Bolg before he faked his death

great desecption