The story was okay until you sprung this dacian crap out of nowhere.

Welp! This story jumped the shark with this chapter.

POINTING A GUN? HELLOO?

A little tip, when you write something, don't write later something different, because when someone reads it in one go, it can be really annoying. This is the only reason why I can't read this story longer, because you contradicted something you wrote some chapters prior

while this is a dark story so far, it's chillingly told and a very good read

This was another masterpiece. I think you are my favorite fanfic writer now, no contest. I loved reading it, your ideas are so creative and unique. I’m amazed by your talent!

Deranged Dacian

Explains a lot. There’s so many details from previous chapters that always seemed so minor but later, like in this chapter, you show us the landmines we’ve been playing hopscotch over. It’s incredible and frightening.

I should have learned my lesson when I read APM: you are not to be trusted with my feelings. oh my goodness.

It’s so funny: the amount of times Bella has been to the hospital.

Shivering! I love this new setting, as sad as the circumstances are, it’s interesting to see Edward not having to adhere to the high school facade. It was always unbecoming for him, my opinion. He’s a man.

How do I confess to my husband that I’m having an emotional affair with a fictional character? Edward makes me positively swoon, oh dear.

I literally cannot understand how I am reading this for free. You put me through such a wide spectrum of emotions, mostly debilitating anxiety and despair, and yet you keep me reading through the chapters with a thread of hope by way of a rich and handsome vampire. You’re playing with me, squeezing my heart with grief but tickling me with this potential of love from Edward, my man. UGH. It’s not sufficient to say I’m on the edge of my seat, it’s more like I’m in the cockpit of a fighter jet waiting for you to pull the ejection handle!

This is so utterly unjust. What a bitter and shameful, undeserved situation. :( My heart breaks for her, man. I’m gonna need to see all of those adults to be tortured. I need retribution for Bella. How awful!

Okay, as before, I love all the details you put into your stories. The backgrounds behind your characters, I know you invested quite a bit of thought behind each situation you put them in. It’s painful to read about the hardships Bella is experiencing, I can’t help but wonder if it’s necessary to put her through these traumatic events, but then I see that it just adds to the complexities of her reactions to Edward’s intentions. It’s fine work and I am enjoying it thoroughly. Thank you. 3