Reviews for Adaptation
Christopher Terry chapter 23 . 10/11
The story seems to be getting interesting. I don't care too much for all of the training parts, they seem pretty boring to me. However, that's certainly faithful to the DBZ source material lol.
Legate619 chapter 54 . 8/31
"Endslayer" is an absolutely EPIC title, both for a chapter and a character. Expect to see people emulating or outright ripping it off for years to come. Kudos.
davidiscoolya113 chapter 1 . 4/21
Humanity is the only species that can shatter there limit's, saiyans the only species that can come close, they can only temporary shatter there limit's then forge New ones called a zenki boost, ((Search Results
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A Zenkai Boost is a sudden and permanent increase in base power that saiyans get whenever they heal from an almost lethal wound.) Depending on heritage of saiyans genetic's it can be a times two boost all the way up to six times boost).
absolute-insanity chapter 74 . 4/6
What a ride!
Atryx10 chapter 37 . 3/18
Actually, Hitler's art was too rigid and based in reality to make any headway in the artworld back then, hencewhy he was recommended to an architecture school by the art-school's headmaster, who Hitler had a lot of respect for, according to the first chapter of Mein Kampf...
Atryx10 chapter 29 . 3/18
such a fucking epic movie.
Seraphy64 chapter 26 . 1/7
Brilliant. Lets not look up every caoe in E88, to that when 2 show up we don't know their powers. Then jump in the weird fog that's moving way too fast.

This Taylor is almost too stupid to live.
Seraphy64 chapter 17 . 1/7
So last chapter she realises if she keeps looking for fights she's gonna eventually be found out. So what does she do the first fight she comes across? Jump in. Fucking moron.
Seraphy64 chapter 16 . 1/7
It annoys me how stupid Taylor always is. Every fic someone always finds out her secret identity. They follow her. She slips. She brags. Anything.

She knows Sophia has been following her for weeks, several times a week. Instead if doing anything about it, like idk, finding out why. Or following her instead. She does nothing and eventually leads Sophia to the junkyard to discover her and her dads secret.
Iryelb chapter 74 . 12/28/2019
Another smashing success, I thought for a while that you were going to make Leet a little overpowered, but his gravity machine didn't last long and the becta tank wasn't all that powerful, I feared he may make the senzu bean or something. Also, it took me an embarrassingly long time to figure out that Garret was Uber. I am a little disappointed that your Taylor is never even the slightest bit interested in having a boyfriend, or girlfriend. She's just pretty much completely asexual, and while original Taylor always kind of gave me that vibe she at least showed a passing interest in hot guys. I'm assuming you're just uninterested in adding that kind of stuff, and it's really only a minor quibble anyway, I just found it mildly disappointing. Overall, I'm very impressed with the quality of your Worm fanfics and will continue to be a loyal reader for the foreseeable future.
Zapper3000380 chapter 74 . 12/28/2019
Very epic, I like how the Case 53s get a happy ending.
Guest chapter 46 . 12/26/2019
Dude how strong is your Alexandria? It doesn't even make sence
Guest chapter 38 . 12/26/2019
Great story. But boy are your powers scales skewed. How strong is Alexandria if after facing Ash Beast she is still 500 times stronger than Taylor?
animusand chapter 73 . 12/19/2019
Sweet Baby Jesus! The the multi-verse is likely infinite in size. That's a big meatball.
apeljohn chapter 30 . 11/29/2019
I am loving your characterisation of Sophia. Actually growing as a person? What is this dark magic?

It was a good choice of viewpoint for other reasons, too. Firstly, that dawning moment of realisation when the reader thinks "wait, they're going to torture her to near death, then heal her up, then repeat, and she's a *saiyan*..." and starts wondering how the devil Taylor is hiding her grin. Secondly, excellent snark.
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