Honestly glad that you never finished this story. What you summarized here would have honestly killed my love for the fic. It's bad. Really bad.

Had this open for months from chapter one, because when I saw those first words of this last chapter, I knew I needed to experience it one more time. You created something wonderful here. Thank you for having done so.

I'm not sure I liked how the story was going to turn out, so I'm kinda happy you stopped when you did.

Hello, I'm sorry to see this story end. Thank you for the laughs and excitement that I experienced reading this story.

Man, im sad this is over. I would have loved to see some more of Dragon. Im sure his Papa dynamic would have rubbed off well on Naruto and he might have adopted it for the village as he started ascending the ranks.

Papa Hokage. Woulda been hilarious for a very serious teenager to do that but

I love all your stories very much thank you for writing them

How's life when you're retarded?

Its sad that we will jever get a proper end to this incredible piece of fanfiction.

Hello vast emptiness of the void, instead of saying surrogate grandson, itd make a lot more sense for you to write unofficial grandson, since by both definitions of surrogate, Naruto is neither releated to Hiruzen in any way, nor is Hiruzen using Naruto as a substitute grandson, since he already has one.

I have been reading this story for years now my friend and I very very sad to see this story go thank you for all the joy & tears you have shared with us.

Good.

Hinata has achieved a legendary staus in her own right. Beware, for she's one of the Quiet Ones.

Makes no sense

Great job.

Why can't naruto see hinata?.