Then they go back in time and help the stargate people.

Very interesting and a well-written story

Well-done! I just wonder if SG1 had their memories deleted or changed?

I reread this gem and your other stories out of nostalgia, I hope you're doing well mate. You've been off the radar for quite some time so I'd like to think you've gone on to become a famous author instead. Be well you two (or more nowadays).

Fun story. I enjoyed Luna and Harry’s relationship, and the Stargate twist to it. Thanks!

Not a bad story, with the exception of the "Luna ex machina" that pretty much guaranteed everything would go right and, in doing so, really lowered the drama quotient. Furthermore, by making Luna "all seeing", you made the "surprise" scenes (such as the attack at the wedding) less believable, since Luna should have known about it already.

You tend to do a lot of "telling" and much less "showing". Most of this chapter is just pseudo-recaps of events that occurred; instead of just saying "Snape was interrogated" and "Sirius did stuff", SHOW us it actually happening. Showing is always better than telling, and makes a chapter less dry.

On his first try, Harry hits 6 random runes and just happens to stumble on a correct dialing sequence? SG command played with it for *months* before they found a successful combination! And, while the show was inconsistent with how a gate determines when to close, we've never seen a portal that closes after only a few seconds.

Everything from the death of Voldemort in chapter 13 on is unnecessary fluff and should be cut.

These last few chapters are REALLY boring.

old gay boy dumbledor batty boi lol

My only issue is that the Stargate isn’t mentioned much in later chapters. Like, it was all primed earlier on in the story where they’d probably need to move the Wizarding World to Sirius or something, because of something Luna Saw but then they just disappeared. Loved it otherwise, though 3

I love this version of Madame Bones. Thank you for your wonderfull writing.

dropped at 8/24, read 16 as well. it was good book but not for me

I get very annoyed at how Lords in this AU have the seeming right to murder anyone because they're annoyed. Not much of a basis for a society. More reasonable would be everyone in the Wiz being equal, with some slightly more equal than others.