|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Stargate|
| bobthebuilding chapter 6 . 8h
Lol at the reviewer complaining about the awful made up name of Hardwin... which is the canon name of an ancestor of Harry.
| bobthebuilding chapter 4 . 9h
I don't think he broke apparition rules, as he used line of sight or travel guides that have pictures so he could visualize the destination as well as know the distance. The first one he also knew the distance and merely went up, so didn't need to know the specific destination.
| freesayan chapter 24 . 10/3
| fortinpatric chapter 24 . 9/27
Merci super de belle histoire
| alastorfenrinheil chapter 24 . 9/12
beautiful story. thank you.
| Katescats chapter 24 . 8/28
Hi, that was a very good story.
| redbloodedrose1 chapter 1 . 8/29
Disappointed, high hopes for an adventure after fixing Moldy shorts with the SG 1,
| Keronshara chapter 16 . 8/26
I feel like Harry's act is missing just a little something, like a magical rainbow-lights spotlight above his head constantly shines down on him, although the spotlight isn't quite right either. Missing something or not, Harry's performance is hilarious!
| Mark chapter 20 . 8/22
Studying law under Blackstone? I'm impressed; I haven't seen his books, Laws of England?, since I was an undergraduate in Philosophy.
| not a fan chapter 20 . 8/22
it's hard to keep reading when harry stops being harry and becomes something more similar to malfoy... it's horrible and even more so when he does it to his friends and even insults them... honestly it's disgusting
| not a fan chapter 9 . 8/22
I don't even know why it's a xover with stargate if practically the sg-1 appear for a couple of paragraphs every several chapters and they don't come out again... on top of that they have been removed super quickly from the investigation... disappointing
| not a fan chapter 5 . 8/21
firstly, cameras shouldn't be affected by glamours or the like, they only affect the perception of living beings (you don't even say half a chapter later that muggles would be able to find and exterminate most wizards in 1 week, which it makes your attempt to make glamor work with cameras stupid and pointless... and for a drama queen you say the survivors would destroy the world 20 years later... exaggerated and stupid)
that moon can see all the futures like doctor strange in end game... it's an exaggeration at best she should be able to see fragments of possible futures and not the entire time line...
Harry's real name is Hardwin? go to hell, it's a shitty name, I'll take harry or hadrian, if it was lily who gave him the name she would never have given harry that name
stupid phrases and a simpler way of saying it:
"the food portions of their breakfasts" - "the breakfast"
excessively repeated things in a few lines:
"phylacteries/horcrux" (in 2 lines 5 mentions and a few more mentions in the next 6 lines)
I don't know if I'll do this with each chapter from here on... it would be too tiring
| not a fan chapter 4 . 8/21
The apparition if I know it correctly only works if you've already been there or know where you're going, you've basically broken all the apparition rules.
then there's the fact that harry hasn't trusted sg-1 one bit... he's been taken from the planet he was on... at least make him trust a bit...
and let's not talk about going to new york from colorado without knowing where he had to go ... come on and what a few plot holes
| not a fan chapter 2 . 8/21
the real names of hermione's parents are DAN and EMMA (or at least the most used ones) merchandising... not a person's name
I don't understand your fixation either for mentioning exact distances...
"rune sunk 1/8 of an inch"
"from 3 to 5 meters"
"about 3 meters"
seems stupid... you could have easily said
the rune sagged a bit
Harry walked a few meters away.
and similar things, I don't know why people try to be so exact with these distances, I doubt there are many people saying... well, I moved 1 to 3 meters away from here and then moved 2 to 10 centimeters to the right ... seriously, it's annoying to read
| not a fan chapter 1 . 8/21
I don't care that you practically copied a whole fucking chapter from the book, what makes this chapter disgusting is that you switch between normal and bold type... it's irritating to read, pure rubbish that makes my eyes bleed... I hope I don't come back let's see nothing like this shit in my life