Reviews for Brooklands at SAS training camp
Raalina chapter 8 . 10/13/2019
Good chapter
Sylvia chapter 8 . 10/13/2019
Lovend thuis chapter.
Please continue!

Sylvia from The netherlands
627-OrganizedChaos chapter 7 . 4/20/2019
Whew!
This was really good and I'm excited to hear more! The fact that Julia Rothman has a son and that he's out for revenge?
Awesome.
I would love for some of his classmates to discover Alex sparring with Wolf for crushing the obstacle course, just something to prove how capable and dangerous he is and that he's not a druggie. Of course I love to torture my characters so maybe not :)
Please continue! This is a really great idea.
xanmelton chapter 7 . 11/20/2018
really great story. Please finish
Guest chapter 7 . 10/23/2018
Nice chapter. A luttele short thought.
Please continue!
Em0Wolf chapter 6 . 9/25/2018
Ooohhhh! Great chapter! I love the creativity of the calculator alarm system, I could never think of something that creative! Definitely building up tension at the end there, can’t wait to see what SCORPIA has planned!
TheWeirdPersonNextDoor chapter 6 . 9/24/2018
Oh no, SCORPIA.

If you want the math work to be accurate you could say RElearning multistep algebraic equations, that would be more accurate(unless Alex was in a lower math class, but he seems like he’s supposed to be smart).
xanmelton chapter 1 . 9/16/2018
this is amazing please continue.
Sylo1987 chapter 5 . 9/16/2018
Love this story.
Your wrighting is really good

Please continue

Sylvia from the netherlands
Em0Wolf chapter 5 . 9/14/2018
Ooooooohhhhhh interesting! So excited! Loving it so far, I look forward to reading each chapter whenever I get an email about a new chapter!
Shiro chapter 3 . 9/9/2018
Good job, I'm waiting for what's after. Hope it will come soon. Please keep writing like that! I really love it !
Em0Wolf chapter 4 . 9/11/2018
Great chapter once again! The tension is building! Keep writing, but don’t feel pressured into it, you write when you want great work so far, keep it up!
otterpineapple03 chapter 4 . 9/10/2018
Literally I love that you update so quickly it means I don't have to reread the previous chapter to remember what's happening and its greeeaaatttt
Guest chapter 3 . 9/8/2018
Thanks so much for the new chapter! I’m loving it! The plot is turning out to be very interesting, and I think the figures on stage are k unit, but if they are, I’m excited to see their reactions to Alex! Thanks so much, and keep writing, I’m 100% sure I’m not the only one ecstatic about the new chapter!
TheWeirdPersonNextDoor chapter 3 . 9/9/2018
I've read a lot of these "Alex & class goes to train with the SAS" but this one could very well be the best. It's well written without many grammar/ spelling mistakes (of which I make many), and the way the kids find out they're going to go is better than most.

I do have one question: are you planning on making Alex hide his skills, or are you going to make it so that he doesn't give a frick and he goes all ninja on them?
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