Does this mean that Mariane was commissariat? I think we've only seen the social spec commissariat and stg having swappable faces. Good chapter, great popcorn reading (not heavy, not plot, etc).

More Wheaties for Tyriun? Steroids? ...Metagen X3 fed intravenously?

And the Biotic badass is in a traction why Rasa is out cutting up girls. I guess we know who the winner of that little spat was.

No Kage got punked.

Round 2 required :)

At last we get to see why the Shadow was feared.

Seems that people of Premiseverse are easily scarred if two bit thug like No Kage can give them nightmares. I get that Rasa is badass and he was - I assume - pre cybernetics, but his fame in story should in my opinion get him better showing against someone who isn't even biotic.

He reminds me of Okeer - when we heard about them they were ultimate badasses, when we saw them their ass was whooped: mighty Okeer get beaten by Wrex and Butcher while biotic monster lost to top Broker assasin.

Still, it's nice that you decided to expand on tidbit from STG report.

Man, everyone’s a critic huh? Anyway great chapter, creepy and awesome as expected of Rasa. 9/10 not enough spare faces.

Hmm. That was entertaining, but... the fight itself felt a bit flat. The other times Tyriun was mentioned, he sounded like a nightmarish boogeyman, but seeing him in action, he felt more like a typical brash, overconfident second-rate one-trick henchman.

Apart from that, uh... whatever happened to just shooting down ships, or smuggling a bomb on it? Would have been easier (although boring and not story-worthy).

no estuvo mal enrique esa fue una buena pelea aunque exageraste las habilidades de rasa una pelea más pareja habría sido mucho más divertida pero ya que. como ya dije deberias e insisto en la solicitud de hacer informes STG de saren y benezia, pero también uno de Tyriun no kage seria genial no debiste matarlo al fondo seria un muy buen activo del nuevo cerberus, y entrenador de shepard una batalla de trellani y el contra tetrimus hubiera sido fantástica o contra la propia shepard o inalia T'Rome. o no lo crees tu

I think its funny that Rasa scared even a Yahg. With sex.

So she was pre-Tazzik? Huh, there would have to have been one, wouldn't there? And your timeline means she would have been doing it at about 2159/2160.

Can't wait to see what Maya is/why she's special. The ultimate victim to the ultimate killer?

I’m not a native speaker but in the third paragraph: “but they are not subtle in any way but sneaking into infiltrate and kill”.

It’s one of the only major errors I’ve noticed in this entire expanded universe. Just want to bring it to attention in case it was missed because I really enjoy these little lore snippets!

You have some mathematical issues in this piece. Adding together Rasa's service for the military, Broker and Cerberus gets one almost to her reported age and this doesn't include the twenty years you say she went uneducated. Be careful to avoid making it too clear these documents are being pulled out of someone's ...

Is it weird that I think that we need more rasa and maya? Like, maybe not working with Shepard per se but as side characters. I like them, I can’t help it.

Rasa as someone who Tetrimus wouldn't like to fight one on one? Kinda surprising considering his STG report.

Also, is there a chance for Tyriun No Kage STG report? It would be interesting to see skill of someone who beat Ahern, Primarch's Fist Cabal and battled P to standstill yet fled from non biotic.

...you have Rasa as more dangerous than Kai Leng and Theo Pellham? sorry, but i'm just not buying it.

Now imagine Rasa getting her claws into a young Sara Shepard.

If Butcher is the result of her running into David and Rachel then what the hell would she end up as if it was Rasa mentoring her along the way...