I love the last part of this chapter.

I expected the promotion, but even that was done in a better way than I foresaw.

But what made this great was the bit about it not mattering how one feels about senior officers but just doing one's duty - and then how you tied this in to their rights re telepaths.

Really great - you tied so many important human command elements into such a short passage - a real joy to read.

This is kind of amazing.

I am way more excited than maybe I should be. I think you did a near perfect job capturing the feel of Marcus and the Minbari and even Sheridan at this time...and also brought in the sharper more frenetic feel of the Galactica/crew ... somehow even Scar felt so right.

Really amazing to me how it all works so well.

more ?

I enjoyed reading this story.

A very solid ending to a good fic.

Great story by a great author.

This makes good sense to me, thank you for the explanation as it did help.

Also, the best Hyperspace is the Stargate one bar none. (At least between the most famous ones)

I know this isn’t really important as the story is over but I just wanted to ask why is it you think the Cyrannus system is a trinary system there is a map that shows it as a double binary four stars four solar systems in the map is considered canon while the information in it is only considered semi-canon it was meant to be changed as needed to match what they decided for the show.
And why is it that everyone has to make the Claudio jump drive capable of jumping from one side of the galaxy the other one was to keep going further I consider the colonial jump engine a deus ex machina be capable of jumping that far is literally too much personally I would put a hard look at that it cannot jump further then I have a 50 lightyears years going based on what the riders of the show stated they believe the colonial jump drive could do a maximum of about 15 like years that was their calculation limit they’re red line in the Cylons can do three times that we should be about 45 to 50 light years.

I laughed so hard I hurt over Tigh's plucked chicken comment. It brought back memories of Bo and Mack watching the battle out the porthole on B-5.

A good story. Not great but certainly good. A little too much of 'and then this happens and then that happened' going on. I'm also not to fond of the EA bashing. Don't get me wrong I understand it. The Clarke Regime was pretty terrible but most of the EA was fairly good a d pragmatic. I hope to see this addressed soon because I don't like see Earth and the Colonials at odds with each other.

What would be interesting to know is if the jump drives work in hyperspace,since the jump drives need to calculate for things in the way, but there is nothing in hyperspace.

Excellent

I love that you mentioned the conflict between the Alterran and Ori. I bet we could mount some modern armor and armament on the Battlestars.

After all the threats and suffering G'kar has experienced that he would fear adama?you've got him pissing everyone off,the ones who are trying to help the colonies get back on their he gonna go after delenn next?

Why that section about Adama admonishing the centuri about the look he gave the barn?