Reviews for The Chit
ZoeyOlivia chapter 19 . 1/19/2019
Ahhhhhhh I cannot wait for more!
Lily of the Shadow chapter 19 . 1/19/2019
Oh no! That's a hell of a cliffie to drop. I hope the next chapter is up soon!
emjrabbitwolf chapter 19 . 1/19/2019
Harry arrived in the snake/reptile house I wonder? Heh that could be interesting... Harry vs Voldy controlling the snakes in an attack!

I feel for Harry and Hermione, both for different reasons regarding their relationships.
Dumbles is being a total prick regarding his treatment of the Snapes, forcing Severus into service, for which I highly doubt he’s being kept safe. Unless it was an unbreakable vow, any promise from the Headmaster isn’t worth anything! Even then he’d manipulate a vow to suit him!
Severus is a very caring partner to Hermione as his actions following her trauma show. Glad to see the boys acting somewhat mature regarding not being angry with her and taking her word that her marriage actually is a good thing for her.
I wonder if there’s two babies expected...

Love the jumper! The Twins are always wonderfully inventive and I could well imagine they’d make that. Does the black side actually have a ‘S’ on it too? Maybe also in a shade of black, just hard to notice?
They’d know Hermione loves to read, wonder if it works across books? So she always has a reading light for any book...
Harry needs his hair restored to black or he’ll be an easy target to spot.

At least no muggles are going to get caught in the fight in the zoo... though hopefully no creatures will either!

One tiny point, if this is set in cannon, the internet and digital photography were very, very new in 97-98 UK, not sure WiFi (or mobile internet for that matter) were even really a thing then... I’m old enough to have lived through that time, so my poor brain jumped at reading that part... can’t recall if you’ve jumped this story so it’s a decade later or not...
Lily of the Shadow chapter 18 . 1/18/2019
This is really great so far, I look forward to more!
Lucyole chapter 18 . 1/14/2019
A good chapter the Malfoy really care for each other that is sweet Draco will be at least alright maybe scarred but he is alive and Hermione will try to understand Lucius and his ways of thinking the jumper is an interesting present and they feel safe and secure in each other's arms really good more please. *cookies for inspiration*
viola1701e chapter 18 . 1/13/2019
maybe Severus should have worn the jumper...wonder how he would look ;)
Smithback chapter 18 . 1/12/2019
missbelab chapter 18 . 1/12/2019
Poor Draco...
Chelsea always chapter 18 . 1/12/2019
Poor Narcissa and Lucius, they do care for Draco. As food Severus and Hermione’s talk curious to see how she accepts Severus friend
roon0 chapter 18 . 1/12/2019
Another awesome chapter thank you.
ZoeyOlivia chapter 18 . 1/12/2019
I would think Severus would have questions of his own! I mean didn’t Draco kiss her?
Owl chapter 18 . 1/12/2019
Every new chapter of your story makes me happy.
FrancineHibiscus chapter 18 . 1/12/2019
He doesn't want to get too attached, I guess? Too late, really.

I would not trust the Malfoys, either.
RhodaBush chapter 18 . 1/12/2019
MORE soon please
Grovek26 chapter 18 . 1/12/2019
Great chapter
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