Reviews for The Chit
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2018
Not the most important thing in the chapter, but Harry is a half-blood, not a pureblood! That’s why he lived with his muggle aunt: his mother was a muggle-born.

I agree with Severus about Dumbledore’s lack of empathy and single-mindedness towards Harry to the point of neglect to all other students under his care.
Ciule chapter 1 . 9/8/2018
Oh, very promising indeed!

I'm not sure how old Hermione and Harry are, though. They've finished Hogwarts, but the Dark Lord is still around, right? (It's an obvious AU, so it doesn't bother me, I'm just curious.)
teishamarie chapter 1 . 9/7/2018
A very promising start! I rather like the non traditional perspective from Severus' POV.
Taylax-b chapter 1 . 9/7/2018
Carry on! Seems like a really good story line going!
364 | « Prev Page 1 .. 15 22 23 24 25