Reviews for The Chit
Cavelenare chapter 22 . 2/27/2019
Yay! I thoroughly enjoyed! Thank you!
Cavelenare chapter 6 . 2/27/2019
Yay! Sweet sevviepoo. I’m really enjoying this fic! Can’t wait to read the rest!
Azriel chapter 23 . 2/24/2019
Oh my gosh, where to begin? This story was magnificent, just such a well crafted story arc which still felt magical and very HP-esque but had it's own take woven perfectly into it.

The characters were so well fleshed out. What I mean is, Hermione...this is the Hermione we deserved in the REAL books. Fragile, resilient, passionate, hesitant, loving, hopeful, hurt and still quintessentially HERMIONE that reading her was just a sheer joy. Snape was equally well written, his motives and self restraint felt beautifully in character while also showing us a different side of him.

Their relationship was gorgeously romantic and fraught with danger, tension and deliciously bittersweet moments like the part where they examined each others scars. Oh, the ending was beautiful and hot and just AMAZING!

HOLY CRAP I could go on all day but let me just reiterate what an epic masterpiece this was. You're amazing and so talented and you've turned me on to a ship I've never really been that interested in before.

Standing ovation!
mzsha18XX chapter 23 . 2/23/2019
I absolutely loved it. It had passion, lust, love and even real relationship hardships. Great story
amsev chapter 10 . 2/23/2019
Love this story. Love your take on our protagonists. Thank you for writing!
lordvoldrmrt chapter 5 . 2/22/2019
Hi! I really like the way this is going. But I have a question, English is not my first language so I never really quite understood what “The Chit” meant. If anyone could explain this to me. Thank you!
And keep the good work and the good writing.
Honestly don't you two read chapter 23 . 2/22/2019
I liked it! It was sweet!
happiness8000 chapter 23 . 2/22/2019
Loved this fic, I like how you changed things around with the plot. Severus and Hermione's relationship was a nice mix of angst and understanding. Always love evil Molly.
SL chapter 23 . 2/21/2019
Thanks for such a sweet story!
ArtemisBare chapter 23 . 2/20/2019
A delightful read! I hope to see more of your work in the future
ArtemisBare chapter 12 . 2/20/2019
Do I need to pay for a band of singing sealife? Kiss the Girl.

Jeez man. Get yourself together.
With her, specifically.
ArtemisBare chapter 10 . 2/20/2019
I'm here for some Molly/Ron bashing.
ArtemisBare chapter 7 . 2/20/2019

Isn't she just the best? I hope she's out there writing real world books or something.

Great work so far. Enjoying the read!
Grovek26 chapter 23 . 2/20/2019
Great chapter to end on.
teishamarie chapter 23 . 2/20/2019
Fantastic! I'm so glad you shared this with us!
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