This sounds interesting.

good history

There r very few fics with fem Shirou's as a base. So I am looking forward to seeing what comes of this fic. The starting is very good and the first chapter was very satisfactory. So I am looking forward to the next chapter. Pls update soon.

Not bad, but since it's the first episode I can't tell if it's quality or not.

Just FYI, I don't know if Emilya can produce good projections yet. Six months after HF in the original fan-manga she still couldn't, since in HF she was relying on archers arm for the blade records.

Granted, with the boost given to her at the start of this novel she may have polished her projection skills, but I don't know if she can pull off something like UBW. She'll definitely have smaller reserve than Illyasviel, but more than Shirou did.

Interesting concept, nice to see that you didn't include Emilya interfering with Issei's death like most crossover between Fate and DxD. Wait is this is a Fem!Shirou x Harem, would it be made up of guys, girls or mixed? sorry if it sounds stupid, it's just he used to be a guy but also it seems Kalwarner like her, though Kalawarner seems OOC or at least does not seem like your typical Fallen Angel from Raynare's group but then again we don't know her real personality since she was killed very early. Hope to see more.

well your using Emilya that's new ever since Kuro popped up most folks use her and that's understandable she is just loli EMIYA but it's nice to see the original genderswapped Shirou being used (despite being a fan creation)

Like you said there aren't many fanfic using Emilya in it so this greatly interest me although the story feel bland, boring, flat right now so it need improvement.

A bit pointer, Rule Breaker is ultimate anti-magic Noble Phantasm capable of dispelling and destroying any kind of thaumaturgy by returning it to their original components in a state "before they were made." so the devils who are more sensitive to magic more than human should be able to sense her dispelling the bounded field that they erect.

I also curious how Kalawarner become enamored to her to the point she leave grigori for her so please make Kalawarner POV about it.

Also, if you need reference on how Shirou (male) would act as Emilya (female) there are some good fanfic with reverse gender Shirou in it one of them is FateStay Night Prismatic Chaos by Alyeris (unfortunately I forgot almost all the title beside this one because it the first reverse gender Shirou fanfic that I read and like beside the Emilya or Archeko one).

Like the concept, shame the delivery is flat, boring, one dimensional.

nice cant wait for the next one

I'll give the benefit of the doubt here coz, well, Heavens Failure Shirou is rarely used. Unless you managed to somehow make a good incorporation work since DxD and Fate are different stories of their own with Fate's "Age of Gods" none existence and DxD's Age's Continuence.

Also, keep track of how characters interact.

That's all for now.

The story is kinda flat at the moment...
I don't really feel the emotion that Emilya is feeling, nor do I see much of her thought process...
Description of event is either somewhat lacking, or redundant at places...and they don't exactly impress upon the reader of what the situation was like...
then there is also his nonchalant about his sister using her own body to save him...He doesn't seem to have any opinion one way or another about it.
Overall, the characters kinda act like cardboard...

I really like the premise, but the writing is not really there. Oh, better than many certainly. But isn't quite there.
I really like the concept of Emilya and I hope to see more of her too...There just aren't enough Heaven's Failure fanfics.

Looks promising with a good start. Shirou does seem a little ooc but let's blame that on his new body and unstable hormones, yea?

Aside from that, I like how you had kalawarner leave the grigori to live with Shirou. There aren't many stories that involve her as a sister figure slash romantic interest. Perhaps you could give an interlude of sorts on why she decided to do so. Somehow it feels like you had her take the role of Taiga and Sakura for Shirou and if anything it seems to give him something to anchor himself to instead of running around and being a self sacrificing hero.

Will other characters from his reality make their way to him? I can see Zelretch informing the sisters that he's still alive in another dimension as a motivation for them to learn kaleidoscope and march their way there just to kick his ass. Maybe have the kaleidosticks as well. Levia-tan and Magical Emilya should be sufficient to give Sona wrinkles, Lol!

Your story has good potential. The amount of decent Archerko/Emilya fics can be counted on one hand. I hope you carry on with this. Good luck.

i like this. continue writing.