Reviews for The ghosts of my life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome start I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol I thonk Sam will take it well, he already senses Alison, so it wont be a far fetched truth he has to grasp. Fantastic chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to read some more! |
![]() ![]() very good |
![]() ![]() ![]() When someone is speaking, proper quotation marks help. The dashes make it a bit more difficult to read through and to be able to tell who is speaking. I'm guessing since you said you aren't translating, that might mean that English isn't your native tongue? If not, I commend you on your grammar and punctuation. If it is, it needs some work. Best of luck to you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for more |