|Reviews for The Wall that Fell|
| GabbyReader91 chapter 20 . 6/14
Oh my goodness. I have been reading and re-reading this story for years. After reading the update for a final chapter in the works a year ago, I am constantly checking to see if it's been posted. Chapter 20 makes me feel so sad. I am dying for the final chapter!
| Guest chapter 20 . 4/4
I can't believe this story was published in 2003...That's twelve years ago. I've been reading this story for almost that long. It's one of the few stories whose names I remember. I probably should have given up this story for dead a long time ago, but every once in a while I'll think of it and look it up. I'm asking really more for myself than anything, but I hope you'll finish it!
| erstott2012 chapter 20 . 3/13
Totally not what I expected...defiantly heart breaking xxx but a brilliant read
| MonicaClareS129 chapter 20 . 1/2
Hey! Well, I was wondering if there was another chapter ever coming? It's been years but from my understanding you've updated over the span of years before. You said there was going to be another chapter so I'm curious if there ever will be? It's a great story by the way! Very depressing...but great nonetheless!
| AnneAC chapter 20 . 12/22/2014
So sad. I'm crying so hard because I was reading this while listening 'Goodbye, my almost lover'. I want him to be happy.
| Beukie chapter 20 . 11/16/2014
Please tell me you are going to make a happy ending on this one. I love te story bit it is really sad now.
| Apollo chapter 20 . 8/12/2014
I have no clue what to say, this is one of the only fanfics that made me cry. You CANNOT be finished yet.
| Failisse chapter 20 . 8/5/2014
I don't think I can handle seeing Legolas in pain like this. Doesn't he deserve to be happy after all he's been through? I keep telling myself that somehow she would come back but I have no hope anymore for that. I think I'm going to cry for a long time after having read this chapter. I do hope to read the last chapter, just to see how it ends, but I hold no more hope for a happy ending...
| Pammie312 chapter 20 . 7/26/2014
Any chance we'll be seeing the final chapter, perhaps to give us an early Christmas gift in July? Hope so!
| TMNinjaGinga chapter 20 . 7/20/2014
I cannot begin to tell you how much I love this story and I have to agree whole heartedly with the last two reviewers...
I had taken me 1 day to read this as well and the tears have flown. I was considering not finishing the story after chapter 9 since it hadn't been updated in a while and I was becoming rather invested in the characters happiness...but I thought in another 11 chapters, the story might progress to a place where I could deal with the ending.
I don't regret reading on because, what a story! But I could not have been more wrong about the 'ending'.
My one hope is that as a half elf she should be able to choose immortality if she wished. I don't know the elf lore nearly as well as you clearly do and so don't know if that really is the case and if so, of that hold true in death... But unroll you update again, I'm holding desperately on to that.
Thank you for writing a beautiful Legomance (I believe you've spoiled me for all others) and I'm so appreciative of the fact that you took most of the story outline and background from the books. Apart from the depth doing that alone gives you over starting with the movies, you are a great writer. Thanks for giving me another look into Tolkien's world.
May your thoughts be swift and your ink run smooth.
| reader34 chapter 3 . 3/2/2014
OMFG THE LAST SENTENCE KILLED ME
| TheMotherQuill chapter 20 . 2/13/2014
It's probably too much to hope, in 2014, after over a year of dormancy, that this will be finished. But I'm a sucker for impossibilities. I read all twenty chapters in one day and I have not been more emotionally invested in a story or its characters in a long time. The whole "Legomance" thing is so overdone, and in ways that span from laughable to cringe-worthy; but not so with this story. I found your depiction of Legolas to hold true to the Legolas from the books and your knowledge clearly stems from someone who loves the books behind the films, which endeared you to me immediately. Your original character, just when I thought she would become one of those unbearable Mary Sues that save the day and marry the hero, became even more human and relatable. As I said, it's probably too much too hope for a grand finale, but you certainly have one apt reader ready for the final installment.
| nomnomfox chapter 20 . 2/2/2014
will there be a happy ending?
| Tauriel117 chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
How come you know so much Elvish? I am not rude or anything, but if you look in an Elven dictionary or just type anything you wrote in Elvish like ''Lye coie.'', it does not exist!
| systematic.star chapter 20 . 1/16/2014
Holy flipping shiz this story is amazing. I am actually weeping :'( keep up the brilliant work!