Reviews for Father Mine |
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![]() ![]() ![]() going through all my stories in the library and i definitely laughed when i wasnt supposed to at riffraff lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story. I'm on to the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would have transfigured something into a just the right size wagon to avoid having to carry those boxes. Wheels are your friend. Grandpa Arthur and Weird Uncle George were very helpful, I see. But...oh, dear, hope they find Rose soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic. I'm hitting follow, for certain. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my rifffraff. You’re a genius. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A real sweet redheaded lady about five feet tall and 50 years old? Oh, I just know where *my* mind went to (seven children would er, stretch things...right?). Falls over laughing, I know you did that on purpose! I loved the frank discussion that Severus had with the store clerk, too. I'm sure the poor fellow has heard it all and he's a sweetheart. And yeah, Hooch would probably try to charm Gigantor so she could *fly* on it. I think lunch or dinner with Devon and his husband would be great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Riffraff?! I'm mentally jogging through my memory of this story, and have no recollection of that name. Must be a previously unmentioned character. On a side note, I was wondering when that bracelet would come into play. I'm glad Rose was easily found unharmed. Such a good story despite it being frightening subject matter! And so well written! Thank you! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m literally racking my brain trying to figure out who tried to take her. Looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() oh no, what a cliffhanger- now I will need to reread the 40 chapters to see if I can figure out who is riffraff - you are a tricky writer , thank you such a great read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the chapter, especially how it ended riffraff… I can’t wait for the next chapter, would have love to seen what Severus did before coming back to his family. Hope you are well and thank you for continuing this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was amazing even though waiting to find out what happened to Rose was killing me. Also wanted to let you know that you misspelled Hermione in the 17th paragraph from the bottom, keep up the great work and can't wait for the next chapter. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Way to turn a serious moment into something lighter, riffraff indeed! Glad to see the update, keep up the great work and stay awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for the update! loved this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so happy for the update, and so trilled that the charmed bracelet saved Rose, I should have known you had a failsafe from the first time Severus realised Rose needed it. Another well written, well plotted chapter to one of your fantastic stories. |