|Reviews for Locust Addams|
| Cleon16 chapter 3 . 9/19
THIS IS A REVIEW, HE LIKES THE LINEBREAKS
Nice story, similar to previous works in this genre yet different enough to be interesting
| James Birdsong chapter 2 . 9/16
Excellent two chapters
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/15
Really good can't wait for another chapter.
| Hiding Watching Waiting chapter 2 . 9/17
Ooooo. This is good. I'm already extremely expectant for good things with this
| DarkLord0012 chapter 1 . 9/13
Love this story so far hope you update soon can't wait to read what happens next
| Hikari Nova chapter 1 . 9/13
| Shadowing chapter 1 . 9/12
Damn holly. That’s one way to end them.
| JoetheGrim chapter 1 . 9/12
Good start, but a few things could use some work:
You never explicitly mention how old Holly is, is this a triple murder committed by a ten-year-old, or a five-year-old?
Those line breaks are kinda annoying and don't really fit in with the story.
The story itself could use more detail. in 600 words you described a triple murder and the eventual rescue of Holly, which could have been so much more detailed.
On the other hand:
There weren't any big grammatical errors and the premise has a lot of potential, though it does remind me of the Harveste Addams stories a lot.
Keep up the good work!
| LuckyLuca chapter 1 . 9/12
great start. : )
| Padfootette chapter 1 . 9/12
Loved it please update soon
| DiaZeroGear chapter 1 . 9/12
Love this crossover