I really wish that you continued this story because it is an amazing work that I have read countless times. I would love to see you update this again sometime.

It's a shame this seems to have been dropped, it's one of my favorites

good shit. enough said

shits fire. nothing else to say really

you are going to continue the story

I'm not at my computer to be able to post this review as my actual profile, but I have to say that this is a pretty awesome work, and it would be a complete shame to leave it in limbo forever. If you have plans to update it in the future, that'd be amazing.

love this story would love more

I dont know if youre ever gonna continue this story but in case you read this, this is one of the better stories I have read in general and you have made quite a few of my evenings better with this one. Cheers for that!

A very interesting story, about Naruto life and what he is starting to become.
Story has plenty of action and suspense, story just needs several updates for your fan fiction fans.

Yo! Pain, can you come back to this story? It is quite a interesting read and I would love to read more.

More hollows and I lose interest. It would have been fine if you waited for Naruto to actually grow stronger. But no you just throw them in without a thought.

It’s been a while since you last updated this, I would love to see what you have in store for this story.

Yeah Itachi ISN'T just a mass-murdering psycho that did the massacre on a whim... Just used a torture jutsu on a toddler, on a whim (which wasn't required) However, sasuke's mother AND father WERE psychos that tried and FAILED to launch a coupe d' tat, that would have killed MANY innocent people(it's NORMAL for the people trying a coup to be put to death, if they FAIL)... Because they were "pushed out of the village"... Because people thought there was a rouge member of the clan that caused the kyuubi to go nuts... When it was TRUE that it ACTUALLY WAS a rouge member of the clan that caused the kyuubi to go nuts! And a "founding member" of the village? You mean Madara, the guy that WENT PSYCHO and tried to kill a bunch of people because he wasn't picked as the leader?...Are you seeing a reoccurring THEME here? Don't EVEN TRY to make the uchiha seem like "tragic people" or "misunderstood".. They are SCUM... TRASH... Every single "complaint" is their OWN FAULT or IT'S WHAT SHOULD HAPPEN! There is NOTHING at all noble or "good" about them.. They are all VILLAINS plain and SIMPLE. (they don't even merit "Shades of Grey"... They're just EVIL. It is LAUGHIBLE to try to state otherwise.)

So Mitoko was EATING other uchiha souls? Yup, that sounds about right for an uchiha... They are so WORTHLESS, I dunno why writers KEEP putting them in these stories... The uchiha really make me sick.. They are always so "SORRY", and it's "the curse of hatred"... But for THAT MANY people, making that many BAD decisions over and over, generation after generation, learning NOTHING? That's not a curse, and they aren't sorry... They're just trash excuses of characters. Thus, they deserve about as much attention as one would give to TRASH... You IGNORE it, GET RID of it and pretend it doesn't EXIST.

Lemme guess on the spirit... The idiot uchiha's mother? For some reason writers just CANNOT "unlink" those two... I don't know why it's beyond almost all other authors, but it seems to be. Also Naruto not telling people anything? Not shit, sherlock... Why WOULD he? Kakkashi was a CRAP teacher.. THE old toad has taught him NOTHING to defend himself against the akutski. (never understood that one)... Kyuubi's chakra? So what? The akutski are BUILT to "nullify" bijuu's chakra.. So that's LESS then worthless... The basics? How are they supposed to help him against S-ranks? So UTTERLY a waste of time. Tsunade? Why tell her anything? He's done nothing BUT help her, over and over... Yet his training was a waste, she was STILL hiding his heritage (which you never covered WHY, in this one.. You instantly went to whining about the fox again), she's never PUNISHED kakkashi, she hasn't promoted naruto (but did EVERYONE else)... So again... WHY would he tell her anything?